 this should definitely be a separate punch in with a rise into the vowell.

 the synthesizer is not matching your flow here, it could be arranged with less of a 4/4 beat and go to 6/8 in this intermission area.  it will make the trance more effective. 

Let's get it? conflicted premise in the doing content. was this necessary in context? could different words be mire effective for your message and tone of the song. 

the beat needs to totally be dropped here. your vocal layering sounds lazy, especially for the punchline.

quack quack quack? this should have all been sliced and put hard the grid using a sampler and trigger. you just saying it by itself sounds mad goofy.

 you definitely didn't learn my twist. this was bad flow. if you can't rap fast and twist you consonants quickly, you have to splice the repetitions and use an effect to ride the beat better.

phanum! again,  different track, take, punch altogether. sounds lame. and off the drop. 

def sounds like loops with no dynamics or intensity change 

lol is the dude leaving all the comments on this song not getting the point that you dont care about his opinion lol

A collection of songs I've written to start my online music endeavors.

Humble Beginnings

Equals Master.wav

Esta canción está inspirada en María Fauro, la señora que limpiaba en la empresa  donde yo trabajaba y de la que tengo un entrañable recuerdo por su bondad y su coraje. Está dedicada a ella y, por extensión, a todas las mujeres de la limpieza, porque creo que no se valora su trabajo como se debería.

Hemos grabado dos versiones: en la de Carmen París se siente la fuerza y el coraje, mientras  que en la de Ana López Lorente destaca el cariño y la ternura. Y las dos están repletas de una entrega y sensibilidad que consiguen emocionar. Destacar, además, el piano de José Mª Berdejo, el chelo de Pablo Baleta, las guitarras de Nacho Abril y los “polvos mágicos” del ingeniero de sonido Juan Miguel Sánchez, del estudio de grabación Sin/Con Pasiones.

Para ver el video   https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=kAj3gxkoExc

SEÑORA MARÍA (Versión de Carmen París. Para escuchar la versión de Ana López Lorente  https://soundcloud.com/juan-fco-bueno/senora-maria-feat-ana-lopez-lorente?si=8b319bf6318f449caa2593e6a0ec4c22&utm_source=clipboard&utm_medium=text&utm_campaign=social_sharing

Siempre agarrada a la escoba
cual si parte de ella fuera
siempre con cubo y fregona
día y noche compañeras.

Sus manos limpian el polvo
con destellos de ternura
que relumbran en sus ojos
rebosantes de amargura.

Estribillo 

Y es que no ha sido la vida
aquel camino de rosas
que soñara siendo niña
entre blancas mariposas

La vida a veces regala
sueños de miel al destino
pero otras muchas se ensaña
y de hiel riega el camino.

Señora María:
guerrera en la desgracia
que siempre se cobija
en su humilde morada.
Señora María:
¿dónde mana el coraje
que la mantiene viva
y le da tanto aguante? 
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Al despertar la mañana
la saludan las estrellas
la brisa besa su cara
ya marchita primavera.

Estribillo


Always clinging to the broom
as if part of her were
always with bucket and mop
day and night companions.

Her hands clean the dust
with flashes of tenderness
that shine in his eyes
brimming with bitterness

Chorus

And it is that life has not been
that path of roses
that she dreamed as a girl
between white butterflies

life sometimes gives away
honey dreams to destiny
but many others show
and gall waters the road.

Lady Maria:
warrior in misfortune
that she always shelters
in her humble abode.
Lady Maria:
where does the courage flow
that keeps her alive
and does it last that long?
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waking up in the morning
the stars greet her
the breeze from her kisses her face
already withered spring

Chorus

SEÑORA MARIA (Feat. Carmen París)

RIZA Music - Steel Forest

By Phil Dutton & Les Corlett

Lyrics

I've been waiting for the winds to change, To blow me back to shore.
I've been drifting here for several days, It makes me want her more.
You can see I broke her heart - and I know I let her down,
I was careless in the ways of love. So what do I do now?

Blue as I am I still have faith, I can turn this ship around, before it’s too late
Blue as I am I'll plead my case, before I run aground, before it’s too late

The sun and the moon shone down on me, It gave me time to think.
She's all I want, she's all I need to pull me back from the brink.
Sally said "Don't play that game!", "Your lies tore me apart".
"Why not be true with how you feel?", "Now's a good time to start".
I stood in amazement and nailed to the spot, My heartbeat started to race.
I took in the beauty that stood there before me, As she put me in my place.

Blue as I am I still have faith, I can turn this ship around, before it’s too late
Blue as I am I'll plead my case, before I run aground, before it’s too late

The sun  and the moon shone down on me, it gave  me time to think,
She's all I want, she's  all I need to pull me back from the brink.
Who am I fooling? No one but myself, I have to think this through.
What am I doing? I'm constantly screwing, everything up it's true.
If only the seconds didn't pass like hours and my mouth wasn't so damn dry.
I'd give her the reasons if I had the power, enough so I could try,

Blue as I am I still have faith, I can turn this ship around, before it’s too late
Blue as I am I'll plead my case, before I run aground, before it’s too late

Melancholy Blue

This is a very personal song for me. I lost someone very close and this is my tribute to her.

You Can't Wrap Your Arms Around A Memory

Much Love... (💕KEEP ME GOING💕) Love your self's ALWAYS🫂

Keep Me Going!

Recorded at Studio 15 by fabiano matiolla
fabiano matiolla - All guitars, bass, keyboards and drum samples...

Release Date: Out 12, 2023
◆Youtube: https://youtu.be/tZm3MwlCfc0
◆Apple: https://music.apple.com/us/album/antibodies-single/1707661221
◆Deezer: https://www.deezer.com/br/album/488608485?deferredFl=1
◆Spotify: https://open.spotify.com/intl-pt/album/4hmb8eqRhtixxuus59R7Qj
◆Soundcloud: https://soundcloud.com/fabianomatiolla
◆Tidal: https://tidal.com/browse/album/316394143
◆Qobuz: https://www.qobuz.com/dk-en/album/antibodies-fabiano-matiolla/q9b0nz3dsywnc
◆Amazon: https://www.amazon.com/music/player/albums/B0CJ464F3L
Produced by fabiano matiolla

Antibodies

Indie/pop rock, a song about everything and nothing at the same time, rambling about life and the frustration of not having a clue what to do with it.

Not a clue

MTM Productions presents the great rapper-artist from Sweden called Eddie Man(Edinson Rodriguez) who has collaborated with us to create this sensational song within the hip hop genre called "Wit You".
From MTM Productions we thank Eddie for his great work and professionalism to create this fantastic song with us, which was also mixed and mastered in our studios.

Musical production: MTM Productions
Lyrics and melody: Eddie Man ((Edinson Rodriguez)
Singer: Eddie Man ((Edinson Rodriguez)
Mixing and mastering: MTM Productions Studios
Single cover:  Eddie Man.
Eddie Man ((Edinson Rodriguez) - Soundcloud: https://soundcloud.com/eddieboy34/tracks

Wit You - MTM Feat. Eddie Man

Ot-Texture Jam Last Part

Expresses the freedom to have an opinion.

Lyrics by PhANUM01.
Original Track Music by: Young Forever Beats
https://www.youtube.com/channel/UCEZZYh42FIyz8Qc7m9YpPog/featured
https://soundcloud.com/youngforeverbeats

Power

OPINION

When the attraction is there, but the connection is not.

Lyrics by PhANUM01.
Original Track Music by: Young Forever Beats
https://www.youtube.com/channel/UCEZZYh42FIyz8Qc7m9YpPog/featured
https://soundcloud.com/youngforeverbeats

CHEMISTRY

When you know its going down.

Lyrics by PhANUM01.
https://soundcloud.com/david-haywood-strother

Original Track Music by: Young Forever Beats
https://www.youtube.com/channel/UCEZZYh42FIyz8Qc7m9YpPog/featured
https://soundcloud.com/youngforeverbeats

HotNHeavy

A man finds himself caught between two women who happen to be related. 

Lyrics written & Performed by:  PhANUM01
https://soundcloud.com/phanum01
www.facebook.com/phanum.haystro

Small World

Sometimes perfect relationships that are drift apart. One stays, one goes.

Lyrics written & Performed by:  PhANUM01
https://soundcloud.com/phanum01
www.facebook.com/phanum.haystro

Music by: Myer Beatz

POWER

Gone (Mona1)

Sometimes one is force to walk a fine line between home-wrecker and home protector. Enjoy!

Lyrics written & Performed by:  PhANUM01
https://soundcloud.com/phanum01
www.facebook.com/phanum.haystro

Music by: Young Taylor
https://www.youtube.com/channel/UC6PgUmtSAcFMgNY-DI0PgRQ

Cover Artist: Ceskoli
francesco baroffio
https://www.instagram.com/p/BdtrLHeBwaI/

Cheater

Enjoy my sound.  I simply want to share my love for music with the world. If you like my sound, please re-post/like.  Look for new uploads on Friday(s) in your timezone.

I’m a composer, I use my God-giving talent and brain to tell good stories.
                                 L e t m e e n t e r t  a i n u

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