Love Revolution

Your Great Name

A tale of a relationship coming to an end; it had been "heaven" but both parties beginning to recognise that they are now pretending. They "gotta get it right".
I quite like this but am wondering if I have used the title/hook just a little too often. I'll leave it open for now but may change the track if it doesn't grow on me a little more. Any comments will be welcome?

When We Got It Right

Tummein Hi Sama Gaya - Siddharth Dashsharma

Life line 


She dangles her legs, sat upon the ledge.
A detached gaze.
A pale face.
Universal sadness in her eyes.
"Hey, who are you?" I shout at her.
I was just passing by, but something compelled me to look up.
She replies:
"Sod off."
"Okay, okay."
"You don't need to be so nervous."
I know that people often make rash decisions.
Put the brakes on!
It's tough today, it'll get easier tomorrow.
I can't promise that life will pass without pain.
But let's just live, if only to see the bloody credits roll.
Don't cut it short halfway through.
I keep trying somehow to reason with her.
She keeps saying:
"Clear off. Don't stop me from finishing what I started."
I didn't even understand why I gave a toss about her.
But she's barely nineteen.
What the bloody hell?
I didn't know the situation she was in.
But jumping is definitely not the way out.
"Oi, you. Try and switch your brain on, you daft sod!"
"I'm absolutely knackered trying to talk you down here."
"That's it, I'm leaving," I say.
But.
I know that people often make rash decisions.
Put the brakes on!
It's tough today, it'll get easier tomorrow.
I can't promise that life will pass without pain.
But let's just live, if only to see the bloody credits roll.
Don't cut it short halfway through.
I just walked away. I suppose I'm weak.
I ran out of ideas.
I never heard any news of a tragedy.
The city never brought our sights together again.
But if you hear this song, you will remember.
That's the bastard who tried to help.
I know that people often make rash decisions.
Put the brakes on!
It's tough today, it'll get easier tomorrow.
I can't promise that life will pass without pain.
But let's just live, if only to see the bloody credits roll.
Don't cut it short halfway through.

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