Lyrics: Patty Lakamp (https://on.soundcloud.com/9aar)
Music: Tuesday Gray

Criminy, Jake

You swore it was me and not my money
That you loved so much
But you always shy away from my touch

Well, I think you tried to kill me
You said it was an accident
Now I wonder if what you said is what you really meant

You promised me heaven
Underneath that cold moon
You promised me heaven
I didn't know you would send me so soon

After the third time you almost killed me
I was starting to get scared
I don't think I'll ever feel safe anywhere

You swore it was just bad timing
It was just coincidence
But your kind of love is just too intense

You promised me heaven
Underneath that cold moon
You promised me heaven
I didn't know you would send me so soon

You promised me heaven
Underneath that cold moon
You promised me heaven
I didn't know you would send me so soon

Demo '22

You Promised Me Heaven

Fourth track for FAWM challenge (intention to write 14 songs in 28 days). Staying active this week! Second track written today for the challenge.

A rock ballad with acoustic guitars and keyboards, some ambient vibes in here too. 

Written, produced, mixed and mastered by Marcus Mittilä, Morningtide Music, Finland.

FAWM challenge #4 - Rock Ballad - Blood Moon (demo)

You have the life that you see in the clouds
You watch the sun rise and set from the lakes you've found
And if your eyes begin to glaze over now
You can always stargaze someplace where you're safe and sound

So deep in the grove where you open up
Don't waste away with a half filled cup
In riverbeds, are you lonely?
Well come out and play in your own way

The weight of world seems so heavy now
Lighten the load, your dirty laundry
Down the mountain side, you see a new face
Will you keep it alive and share your story?

Well it's time to get away, and shed those layers that keep you enslaved
You lie awake, and wrestle with those anxiety bears that bear witness
To all your storms, I can relate, well fuck that noise and celebrate
Now get stoked, hell yeah, this is the time for you to make your stand

You will weather this storm

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This tune started life as a collaboration between Tom Elliot (TC Elliot)'s lyrics and my music during the 50/90 Challenge. The song has morphed a bit since then, but it still shares that original essence. I am grateful to Tom for his part in bringing this song to life.

Track art by Sara Janda with WanderBrave Studios

Stargazer

One 20

Let Me Out
David Russell Perez
Rusty Perez 11/21/2020

v1
Here in solitary silence
trapped inside this cell
sentence signed forever 
imprisoned by myself
nothing but time
imprisoned by myself


v2
GREY WALLS surround me
a lover's arms so tight
breath that burns deep in my chest 
bottled up inside

 pc
Better angels told me not to walk outside the lines
But i sware that I was taking what was mine
 Sweeter spirits singing lead me through the fire
So many tried to help me save my life

chorus
Let me out I've committed no sin
let me out of the hell I'm in
I've committed no crime
there's no wrong in what I've done 
So let me out
I've committed no sin 
there's no crime in what I've done 
So let me out


v3
living in a secret
and lies become the truth
meaningless seduction 
difference is a truce
between who I am
and who i used to be

v4
Close my eyes for ever
and hold my breath and prey
trading life for living
The consequence I'll pay

 pc
Better angels told me not to walk outside the lines
But i sware that I was taking what was mine
 Sweeter spirits singing lead me through the fire
So many tried to help me save my life
chorus
Let me out I've committed no sin
let me out of the hell I'm in
I've committed no crime
there's no wrong in what I've done 
So let me out
I've committed no sin 
there's no crime in what I've done 
So let me out

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You Promised Me Heaven

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