First, I really dig your music, brotha. :) If you're interested, my opinion/critique is that I wish there was more dynamics and space in this track. I think the drums are burried in the mix, and it's making the track sound weak. What I mean by "space" is really just adding a little bit of reverb to the vocals. In my opinion, they sound very dry right now.

I enjoy your voice, or the signing on this track. 

so nice! kinda reminds me of the good old dahboard confessional songs

the bass sounds absolutely amazing and the song has a great production

How Does It Feel:

Excuse me, I guess it's just a dirty habit
I have a tendency of thinking too much about it
I've tried everything to keep you out
But I get so lonely when you're not around
Time flies faster when we're having fun
In one week I think we may have jumped the gun
You say you never saw this happening
Look in my eyes and tell me what you're thinking

You said you meant every word you spoke
But it hasn't felt the way it had before

So tell me baby how does it feel?
You made me think this was for real, oh yeah
If you don't need me let me go
But before I leave please let me know
Tell me baby, how does it feel?

I found out, it hit me like a ton of bricks
I never thought it ever would have come to this
I knew you once, but now it's just a passing glance
I want you back, but I know I can't take that chance
Goddamn, you really had a hold of me
I wish you never had let go of me
But I can't live this way
We're slipping out of reach

You said you meant every word you spoke
But it hasn't felt the way it had before

No part of me is proud of this
But seeing you happy makes me sick

So tell me baby how does it feel?
Tell me baby, how does it feel?
You made me think this was for real
Tell me, was this real?
If you don't need me let me go
But before I leave please let me know
Tell me baby, how does it feel?
How does it feel? 

When you lie awake at night
Do you think of me, even once in a while?
Or has your love really run its course?
Honey, I've been running back and forth
Over our top forty moments
'Cause you still haven't told me
Won't you let me know?
How does it feel?

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