I'm a beginner on the piano and on producing music, but I figured better late than never. So here's an intro I made not too long ago. It's planned to become a rapsong down the road, until then this is what I have. Please provide feedback. It would be very much appreciated.

Idea for an intro

The updated version of the intro, it's not much but I'm stuck on how to continue with the main part. I want a melody to enter around 23-30 seconds into the song.

It's another intro but I put a bit more thought behind this. I never became satisfied with that other song so this is gonna' be another try. I'm planning to put lyrics to this song so it's a pretty long intro, I'll try to make it more varied.

Dan Isacsson