Rough but its got potential, keep polishing it some more and look up housecharts.net how it goes on it, cheers PS :)

Wake Up & It's Over

Scum

Like a house without a home
It's so sad when you're alone.

You've won the right to smoke but what's next ? Hit the club and celebrate ! Disco, boogie, electric, funk etc 

Music is an orchestrated replica of unexplainable emotions and dreams.