I like the contrast in intensity in the verses and choruses. Nice build up. I like the chord progressions, and the change in feelings between verse/prechorus and chorus. Is it a key change in the chorus? I like the change in subject for the last chorus.

I love the vibes this song gives off. It sound really hopeful at times and conflicting at other times. I also love some of the little things you did like at 1:03 when the kick drum doesn't play on 1s and 3s like the rest of the song (I don't really know how to explain this part :/). I also love that although the guitar is playing the same thing throughout the song, the other instrumentation manages to drown out its hopeful feeling before bringing it back at the end for a nice resolve ending on a hopeful note. Really pleasant to listen to.

Music & Lyrics by Yang Qiyu

Lyrics:

Would You Still Love Me

[VERSE]
I hope I make you happy
I hope I make you glad 
I hope I can always keep you close

[PRE-CHORUS]
But when I’m around you
My darkness gets a little too comfortable
Threatening to spill

[CHORUS]
Would you still love me even if 
I couldn’t feel?
Would you still love me even if 
None of me was real?

[VERSE]
I think you make me happy
I think you make me glad
I know I will always keep you close

[PRE-CHORUS]
But when I’m around you
My darkness gets a little too comfortable
Threatening to spill

[CHORUS]
Would you still love me even if
I lost my mind?
Would you still love me even if 
You knew what I am?

[BRIDGE]
Cause you make me feel like
There’s a place for me in this world after all
When I’m with you I feel alive
My heart starts to beat just like yours

[CHORUS]
Would you still love me even if 
I couldn’t feel?
Would you still love me even if 
None of me was real?

Cause I will still love you even if
You can’t feel
And I will still love you even if
You are empty
Just like me

[OUTRO]
I hope I make you happy

Would You Still Love Me (demo)

Music & Lyrics by Yang Qiyu
Prod. by Yang Qiyu

Lyrics:

Would You Still Love Me

I hope I make you happy
I hope I make you glad
I hope I can always keep you close

But when I’m around you
My darkness gets a little too comfortable
Threatening to spill

Would you still love me even if
I couldn’t feel?
Would you still love me even if
None of me was real?


I think you make me happy
I think you make me glad
I know I will always keep you close

But when I’m around you
My darkness gets a little too comfortable
Threatening to spill

Would you still love me even if
I lost my mind?
Would you still love me even if
You knew what I am?

Cause you make me feel like
There’s a place for me in this world after all
When I’m with you I feel alive
My heart starts to beat just like yours

Would you still love me even if
I couldn’t feel?
Would you still love me even if
None of me was real?

Cause I will still love you even if
You can’t feel
And I will still love you even if
You are empty
Just like me


I hope I make you happy

Would You Still Love Me

Would You Still Love Me (Official Audio)

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Hi there! I wasn't quite sure what life'd be like without music so I started making my own. 
This is where I share stories, memories and random thoughts. At the end of the day, I suppose we all want to feel connected to everyone else, to feel loved, and to try to love people and things around us. I do it through music, maybe you do too?

Contact me at: 
Email: rayvnyoung@gmail.com
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Would You Still Love Me (demo)

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