I agree with @doctorbob, this section was a nice payoff.  I appreciate the coherence and approachability of this piece, high-concept stuff often doesn't work as well as this.

Oh dear. Well, it sets up a really nice late 70's synth vibe (Jarre), but there are a number of so-called "blue notes" that jolt me out of it quite a bit. Try to work out scales, what notes are friendly to your chosen harmonies and things will look up from there a lot. You have the chops and creativity, really.

The leads feel somewhat stilted rythmically. I don't mind the dissonance, though.

An interesting piece of electronica. It got some vibes of JMJ. Regarding composition, combining three themes in the whole is good idea, but I feel that the first one is less connected to other ones. They feels like a parts fro two different sections of an album, not a whole progressin. Btw, it is not a bad thing to do a long track. I saw a very decent electronica entries in the past that was about ten minutes long. The instruments are quite good, but I think they still need more work. And I really miss the percussin in the third theme, it would support the driving and engaging feel of it. Anyway, GL!

For mood this is fantastic, but I think the execution could have been a little smoother as others mentioned.  Great job still!

i think you have done a fantastic job with the sound design and combinations, the atmospheres are very striking.

I'm finding this really interesting trying to decide if I agree about some of the notes not working too well. It's like I can choose to just let it be and enjoy it as it is, or I can focus and notice 'problems' too... all very interesting and subjective I think :)

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