Hi Rain, this is a really nice melody which starts here. I hear either a second guitar or, if it was me it would be some gentle keys, following the melody of your vocal. It's really nice.

Like this opening - sounds almost like a piano playing big sombre notes

Hi Rain,
Hope you don't mind that I've posted a few comments. Really like the lyrics. There are lots of different dynamics within the song, which is good. Are you recording vocal and guitar separate or at the same time? I find it much easier to do them separate. Are you playing to a metronome? It is really useful, if you can get on with the noise it makes. Definitely a track to keep working on.

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Steal Your Life

By Rainwoman

BIRD"S SONG

A stray bird 
Once free and brave
Reaching the sun

Now in a trap 
Invisible wall 
Scream shatters on

     Who’s gonna hear me
     Safe me, give me strength
     Who’s gonna be liberator
      Who’s gonna take my fear 
 
A lonely heart 
Once, living fire
Tossed with a gust

Now smolder ember 
Still hot and glowing
Though covered with ash

     
     Who will inflame me 
     Wake me, light me up
     Who’s gonna free my passion 
     Who’s gonna be my guard


Bird's Song (original)

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