Feedback From Krayzie Bone from Bone Thugs N Harmony

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originality : No. Rating: 4 (Good) This song has a original vibe to it. I like the fact that it doesn't sound like anything else I've heard. 

delivery: No. Rating: 3 (With work has potential) I was really feeling the quick flow, but I really had a hard time really understanding exactly what you were saying in some areas of the song. I feel with a little coaching on delivery that problem can be solved quickly. Remember you want to speak as clear as possible especially when you're rapping that fast. With your first impression you want the listener to understand and connect to what your saying. 

lyrical content: No. Rating: 3 (With work has potential) I like the writing you put forth, very creative, very original, and again, with a little coaching I think you can actually have a shot at the top. 

production: No. Rating: 4 (Good) Production was nice, definitely a unique sound. 



These Days

Feedback from Krayzie Bone from Bone Thugs N Harmony

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originality : No. Rating: 3 (With work has potential) I really like the originality in this concept. Not many people take the time to realize real issues. Appreciate the fact that you stepped outside of the box on this one. 

delivery: No. Rating: 2 (Needs work) Although I really felt the concept, the delivery could've been better. The track was hyped, energetic, and dramatic. But the way you delivered your verse was too laid back, and it didn't quite fit the intensity of the track. Because the track is so big, you have to conquer the beat. You have come with the same intensity that the track presents, meaning, you gotta go harder.. Don't let the track out shine you. 

lyrical content: No. Rating: 3 (With work has potential) You definitely have some writing skills. I like how the words were put together, and I can tell that your a deep writer. I truly feel once you practice more on your delivery and presence you will be a great artist. 

production: No. Rating: 4 (Good) Beat was amazing, very dramatic, and it immediately takes you in a zone


Reckless Feat Prophacy (Armageddon)

Ignore the spelling

Lyrics -

Chorus- 

Yeah ahuuh you no what it issss, All the girls are slags with a hundred kidss,,,,


ahhuh Lads with black tops,socks
walking around in gangs 
showing the tribal tats off,






I'm from a town, a place where the peoples teeth are black and yellow.


I'm from them places, Boys beat thier girls faces,, Black and Yellow






 
1st verse -

Im from a place... let me describe it in one word
where most of the people look like the people from wrong turn
Its smelling of shit like your Tongue Furr,
... Eurghhhhh

Its full of inbreds insest... who are only interested ina
in making mess "unless".. 
they get into bed with your boyfriends,
"next" thier texting your EX,

I guess..


Its full of wannabe wags, an Chavs, an slags,an 10 year old dads,
with tags on thier legs, Lads with tans, from the beds, 

dancing in meds, arms full of steds,

to many men too many men,...thinking their hardcore,
too many pricks too many pricks... more than a dartboard,driving around in cardboard box,,,

or walking around with there socks pulled over pants hands down there crotch,

Why would i wanna go  halo synergy,
get stared out for a minute, by someone looking like an idiot

arghhh what are ya staring,,,

well im staring back

why would you pull up your socks for,

your the knobhead thats wearing the rockport,



Chorus- 

Yeahh arhhhuuu you know what it issss everywhere i go its full of kidsss..

Arghhhh all the fat chicks,cheating pussy
smell of cat fish, wearing matchsticks, (srubber)



An discharge n skidmarks in all of the girls knickers its, Black n yellow



theres rumours and talking lads pull back there foreskin its black n yellow



Verse 2 -


I'm looking around,Warrington Town,

Scrubbers an pidgeons picking up cigerets left on the ground,

you will be bound to bump into somebody somewhere.... now

who's slept with your girlfriend on a night out,

9 months later the kid comes out "black n yellow"



Theres always a group of Lads showing there tats off,
walking around Staff dogs 
talking arghhhhh brapppp brapp I just dont get it,
why you walking bo legged an Constipated
Why you always looking for some confruntation.... 




Well I've got to have a dig at the spice boys on facebook
posing and pouting infront of mirror on naked,

Chorus ..

Reckless - Black and Yellow

Reckless Feat Dalima & Marka - What I know

Produced by DJ MAW
Vocals - Abby McDonald

Lyrics -

Well girls let me explain.

This story an surely then you can relate,

I want you to answer me honestly after the follow questions an that would be great,

question number 1 - Do you take beak and "if so" how much? YES I "guess sooo"...

I knew it I'm lost, for words It looks like your Chewin a wasp, Burp


Question number 2 - If You dont listennn,due to the fact you were pissed an,face like a stroke victim

an dribbling,tell meeee what is it that you were drinking?beg you pardon

Well I started off at my friends apartment,
drinking wine shots,coke and barcardis,
a line of coke in the bathroom, shhh dont tell,, anybody if they ask you,

CHORUS - 

2nd Verse 

First of all why does your facial expretion resembles a foreskin,x2
you're struggling walkingx2,Youre even talkingx2,like Stephen Hawkins,
its 4 in the morning you calling your boyfriend,up,
but he gets missed calls,So you get on that phone,
so you get a lift home,you know,from a randomler,banging you,

spiked,

you wake up,face still covered in make up,cant remember a thing,

so your gonna make up, some lies an lies,

an say that you got spiked, suprise suprise,


so 1 shot 2 shot 3 shot 4 glasses of wine
your telling a lie, you know that I'm right,remember the night,
your not even nice, youll never get spiked,

CHORUS - 



Reckless - Spiked

A verse I have done for a friend's entrance music for Arizona Diamondback's AA baseball.

LYRICS - 

My adrenaline rush spontaneous human combust my competition crushed opposition lost in the distance look, 
I call them my victims my arm is sick and sadistic some say I'm kinda artistic and arsonist when I'm pitching, Their facial expression is autistic the faces of death extinction level event whenever I step up they fall victim all listen,The games over, change over, you'll be needing a make over when I'll be bringing the heat they call me the flame thrower, 
My talents underrated, theres no exaggeration, to say that your overrated well thats and under statement I'll leave you 6 feet under pavement save it you can select your method of payment for me to kick your anus, Not even a smoking ban is stopping me fag, Your taking more shit than a colostomy bag excuse my terminology honestly obviously my terminal velocity has gotten you lost like abes oddysee,
when I deliver i'm fully focused had haven't you noticed Im similar like a propeller whenever i'm spinning rotating and spitting and killing them, hitting them up to the fullest consider me one of the illest i'm faster than bullets burning them murder them men in minutes and into a furriness your finished diminished into a hearse, Im the sickest, the quickest the wicked of course he is, I'm making shake like tectonic plates on earthquakes getting even like 4 and 6, my metamorphosis mind, this is my finishing line I'm bombing them like boston dusting them like hoffman.

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