Excellent melodic sound arrangement and good vocals, a very nice song!

good wonderful songs!☺! nice guitar sound!🎸

Oh cool! Love that you dabble with different genres of music! Love your vocals over a rock instrumental

Good guitars..interesting picture too!!😊✨✨🌜👍

An intriguing baseline and finely mastered vocals. A great blend :-)

rock
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Lyrics
You have existed in this world (Tú has existido en este mundo)
You got used to its colours (Tú te habituaste a sus colores)
Still, I beg you (Con todo, te pido)
to look solely at me. (Que me mires solo a mí)

I feel you saw me as a blue man (Siento que me veías como a un melancólico hombre)
reduced to his weepy lament (Reducido a su lloroso lamento)
with heavy tears, with heavy tears. (Con pesadas lágrimas)

Give me a  black paper (Dame un papel negro)
and you'll be immersed in my whiteness (Y te encontrarás inmersa en mi blancura)
because I am a paperman, (pues soy un hombre de papel)
a paperman. (un hombre de papel)

Look through me and tell me now (Mira a través de mí y dime ahora)
"I'm not inside you!". ("No estoy dentro de ti!")

'Cause I'm the fog (Porque soy la niebla)
the yellow fog (La niebla amarilla)
and you passed away. (Y tú expiraste)

In this  tiny planet, (En este diminuto planeta)
your mind was linked with mine. (tu mente estaba unida a la mía)
Now I look inside you (Ahora miro en tu interior)
to find a void. (para encontrar un vacío)

The purpleness of your soul extincts, (Tu purpúrea alma se extingue)
disappears slowly in the fog (Desaparece lentamente en la niebla)
with no tears, with no tears. (Sin ninguna lágrima, sin ninguna lágrima)

Give me a  black paper
and you'll be immersed in my whiteness
because I'm a paperman now
a paperman.

Look through me and tell me again: (Mira a través de mí y dime de nuevo)
"I'm not inside you!".

'Cause I am the fog
the yellow fog
that regains this world (Que reconquista este mundo)

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