played with somethin dumb on my looper to ease the writer's block pain

A Thousand Miles Reharm ( jam session iphone recording)

alright so i'm experimenting. i'm playing with sounds on my music software and this is a song i am writing and this is all i've got so far. it's way more pop than the last one. Basically it's called Circuit Dialog, and it's about how technology factors into relationships. BUT I NEED YOUR CRITICISMS. if u think the lyrics are cheesy tell me, if you think the music is blending well, let me know. but overall please enjoy. OH AND YOU CAN DOWNLOAD IT IF YOU LIKE.

Circuit Dialog (Preview)

i wrote this a couple days ago and i'll finish recording with vocals and violin later when i'm not so fricken sick.
for now here's the lyrics
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i knew a man, he had a voice like honey

and ain’t it funny, he was bitter like..

a man remembering his old ways

he never had time to waste

it was a ride

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tryna jump off a moving train

when you see the destination is love

you don’t seem the type to play guessing games

so i’ll just bring it up.

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take me home

and you will never wonder 

what it feels like to be with another

dust me off and put me under your arm

i’ll be your priceless music box

singing old love songs like

ooh oh ooh 

pawn shop gold

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i’ve loved too hard before

it consumed me

and since then i’ve been waiting

for someone like you 

just to hold me

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i like the way your hair hangs

covering your eyes

don’t wanna see those things

don’t wanna know when you are lying

-chorus

oh hello again

i recognize your touch

i’ll try my best to be your love

so i don’t end up again

in this dusty pawn shop

in this dusty pawn shop

Pawn Shop Gold piano

blue pool, black night

hard truth, falling skies

summer days turn to winter nights

my man will bring it back to life

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your words make sense but i can’t hear you now

you stopped shining in the crowd

your on my arm i’m on your mind

dark glasses just to hide the worry in my eyes

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and i hit the wall

and as i watched you fall

you closed your eyes 

and i said goodbye and sighed

such is life

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tissue box and tear stained notes

save the hard work for the king of ghosts

let it slip away

let the feelings go for today

KING OF GHOSTS. ACOUSTIC. ORIGINAL.

Flatline. first verse and chorus. just a preview.

It Gets Better

valentine's day song. i wrote it. i hope you like.
XOXO by Riaht Sivad aka me
so there’s this cute guy
he lives right down the street
his vibe is just right
and he’s sick from his head to his feet
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just wanna know your name
wanna know wanna know wanna know who you are
i’m going insane
let’s have some fun let’s take a ride in your car
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do you wanna go
out with me tonight
do you want to be
my valentine
i’m going in i’m gonna ask his number
i’m gonna win, i’m gonna win him over
do you wanna dance
in the moon’s spotlight
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i know he knows
that i have been watching
him strut it like a pro
and i don’t mind his flaunting
he’s got it
so he can do whatever he likes
i just know that tonight he’s gonna be mine
be my valentine
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special night, special occasion
please give in to my persuasion
we would look so good together
xox-oh
your swag is sick, your walk is ill
if you say no i’ll still
be right down the street if you get lonely
oh xox- ohhh

xoxo

I'm working on this song that i've had lyrics for...but recently listening to lady gaga and frank ocean have helped me produce this. i'll probably finish by the end of the week.