Great guitar playing..good progressive vibe on this one..keep it up.

Yes, an imaginative composition which is entirely in keeping with the title "Jupiter". Great guitar work!

Nice driven tone on guitar. Cool tune rob

This is a really cool track! Congrats on creating it! Brvo. Off the beaten track for sure

personal favs

War Hath No Mercy

Nor blanket of kindness, nor blanket of snow.
Covers me whole. Makes no inroads from...
The giant black smoke stack that bellows and blows.
Oh, how it blows. 
Blows out and blows.

Oh, please, oh, please.
Save me, from me.
Eloise, in your garden of love.
Oh, please, won't you please.
Save me, from being me.
Eloise, in your garden of love.

The choices I make must sit right in my head.
Eloise. Come with me.
If I make the wrong choice, I'll wish I were dead.
Eloise, we could be...
So happy you joined us, though you're rather late.
Honey, please, Set me free.
Now eat everything that we put on your plate.
On my knees, work with me.

Oh, please, won't you please.
Save me from just me.
Eloise, in your garden of love.
Oh, please, please, please.
Save me, save me, save me.
Eloise, in your garden of love.

Now I'm walking and talking.
And barely forestalling this breakdown.
Won't come free.
Eloise, in the garden of love.
I walk and I talk.
And say all the words I'm supposed to say now.
Alter me. 
Eloise, in your garden of love.

Some sort of third verse that explains the first two.
Eloise. Follow me?
The storm in your mind can't contain what you do.
Eloise. Follow me?

Oh, please, won't you please.
Save me, only me.
Eloise, with your garden of love.
Oh, please, please, please.
Save me, me, me.
Eloise, with your garden of love.

I'm walking, I'm baulking.
I'm right on the edge of a breakdown.
From the fee.
Eloise. Eloise  Eloise.
I can't walk, and I can't talk.
I can't alter the words that you say now.
Fancy free. 
Eloise. 
In your garden of love.

The choices I make must sit right in my head.
If I make the wrong choice, I'll wish I were dead.
Eloise in your garden of love.











Eloise

Mixed By Steve Fisk
Mastered by Jack Endino.
Fist single off the  Mallrats Record, only at https://shorediverecords.bandcamp.com/album/mallrats?fbclid=IwAR3yaPsCBQXFaxOhc6owsD5rQUe2Njv8ymWC7_ObX5kCwamsPhj6_m8ooSA
Music video https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=vLJzWe3i6vg

That summer girl.

Rider

Hello everyone,
this is finally my first original tune "Elwood's Tune". I wrote the lyrics and the melody - for the first time.
I hope you like it :) If so, please leave a like, a comment and repost the song. If you have some feedback - positive or negative - you can write it in the comments as well.
Have a nice week

Song background:
I wrote the song influenced by the movie "Harvey" from 1950, starring James Stewart. The main character Elwood is a warm and pleasant human being and is starting to have a friendly conversation with everyone he meets. Usually he even invites them for dinner to his home. Even though it's not the only thing the movie is about, I think that in today's day and age - 73 years later - we could use some of this care and friendliness towards others. Maybe even more than ever.

Elwood's Tune

Pat, do you know what it takes?
Can you pile all your bluster into all the shapes.
To always look to improve?
Not so cool.
By the rules. 

Pat, don't you have friends make?
To make it right round all the world keeps turning.
To always be on the move.
In the groove.
Damn their rules?
The old schools.

The bells and the whistles of ancient epistles.
Won't congregate ever for you.
You've been waiting for something to do.
Now you're old and youre greying. 
The prophetic teachers, are incumbent leaches.
You've got nowhere to go.
Or get away from, sing your sad songs.
Fool.
You're a fool.

Pat do you have what it takes?
Can you cover your back in a game with high stakes.
To Always be on the run.
Overcome.
Not begun.

Pat, any more moves to make?
Watching your back in a world full of Snakes.
The fighting talk is done.
Just so wrong.
That two wrongs.
Make a wrong.

The fancy decanters or chains on your ankles.
Won't make any difference to you,
You've been waiting for something to do.
But you're old and youre greying. 
The further the reaches, to days on the beaches.
You've got nowhere to go.
Or get away from, sing your sad songs.
Fool.
You're a fool.







Our latest single featuring Mioune on vocals

The Book of Frost

I Wanna Treat You High

Thank you to Haleen Music for the opportunity  https://soundcloud.com/user-512451604

Lyrics:

You found your strength
Perhaps the source that carries you along

I’m not crippled by your spell
I’m not influenced by your will

You found your tribe to reinforce
You’re exactly where you’re supposed

Jupiter 1

rob fletcher

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