This is just the intruamental so far, and it short cause the middle part of this track is going to be looped and exstended to fit the lyirics. I'm not sure yet if ther will be multipal lyricist or just my self on the finished track or not. I am hoping to get one person inparticular to do vocals but im not sure if he will or not at this point. The song will be about the heartbreak of a man who is released from a prisonterm only to find himself alone.  if you listen to this and have and suggestion, questions, or pointers please shoot em my way im always learning and alway happy to discuss music.  Peace and Love  Roy

You Promised That You'ld Wait For Me

after some good feed back from some freinds i decided the next thing to chainge had to be the back beat. the other beat was on count but it was chopy nest to the rest of the sounds. i t made them seem a little obtrusive. so naturaly i add more kicks in the rights places and though its more drums its actualy less obtrusive and drives the track rather than hinder it. this was a good start. what i realy think it needs is something that makes it pop. a freind of mine pointed out that it sounds familare because the dinamics (particularly the piano start and build) are simular to the dinamic technick to of other songs, and i agree something is missing. something simple but noticeable. if any one can think of what that something may be please i welcom all opions. provited you find my sight in the frirst olace this is only like my 2nd day as a member.  peace and love 
Roy

Roy M Warren