version 0.7 of this specific track: I just wanna know how desensitized listening to this repeatedly has made me - and also gauge what's good and wrong with it - so don't hesitate to critique it (that's what i'd like)  :)

This is a track I'm working on currently - I'm conflicted about how it is right now, because I would like to add vocals, but also I just don't know how I feel about the instruments being used (if bass is necessary, if I'm using too much guitar): 

TLDR: please respectfully and honestly criticize this work :), if you don't mind

kinda just sucks

A track I'm working on rn: also the reason I release so many unfinished tracks is cause I'm waiting to get a good microphone to record vocals (also I like feedback): I have a Blue Yeti "mic" rn :(((. I like how it is right now - but feedback is always appreciated.

is this too honest

I can't wait for the day when I can record vocals :>

fu^k

First version of this song I feel is presentable to you all - I'm just waiting to get this audio interface so i can record with this new mxl 770 I got, then I'll release the finished version of the song: until then, let me know what you think!

falling

https://www.instagram.com/s.o0om/  (check it out if you so desire)

Verse 1:
A quarter cup of some peaches
Two ounces of sugar too:
It's pretty sweet - the way I like it-
Lets add some acid
And some cinnamon too

Pre-chorus 1:
That sweetness I don't wanna forget -
I want it back in place of this bitterness
(oh well)

Chorus 1:
So set the heat on a medium-low,
And let it sit for a minute or so.
And do a dance - or maybe just something to occupy your hands.
So you don't lose something that you love;
guess I had too big a plan,
Or maybe I just need some lullaby jam

Verse 2:
(lullaby jam)
I'm sure other fruits taste fine, but 
Peach and cinnamon do just fine
for my PNLSBNE [Puhnales Beneh] palette.

Pre-chorus 2:
But I guess
There's no point in holding on
(There's no point in going on)

What I had should be long gone by now.
(What I had should be right here with me).

Bridge:
'Least I hope she's in a better place than I,
'Cause this mental state is simply to die for.

Chorus 2:
So set the heat on high, and
let it boil, meanwhile I
Will sit and rack my brain - wring out every mistake I could've made:

Is it fair to anyone - 
I don't think I care -
I'd just like to fix what I broke,
something 'bout "lullaby jam" or so he wrote.

lullaby jam

first version of a song I'm working on:
Lyrics (for now)

Prechorus:
...
BPM, step it up,
and let your worries drop dead.

Chorus:
So please sway your body from
Side to side
I promise you nothing matters more tonight.
So please sway your body from side to side,
Rock yourself senseless,
Rock yourself outta your mind.

outta your mind

A song in the works - and I really like how its shaping up :>
The lyrics (as of now) are:

Verse 1
Do you mind if I
talk about
The things that like to
bounce around 
my head

Bridge 1
Cause it seems that 
every now and then
those lovely thoughts
barge back into my head, and
it's not anyone's fault
in particular.

Chorus 1
Oh my eyes do they deceive me?
Too many tears to weep.
(far from love, far from love)
Oh is this really what I see?
To fly like a dove
but I think I've clipped my wings.

Verse 2
And I could go on and on 
if I really tried
But I'm sure that you would
really mind 
(oh well)

Bridge 2
Cause sometimes I sink,
and keep myself far from relief:
but I'd hate to tarnish your ears
with rambling 'bout that.

Chorus 2
Oh my ears - do they believe me?
this languid melody.
(far from love, far from love)
Oh to think it's what I keep
so far from my sleeve
everyday.

ramble (v1)

I worked on ramble some more - and I quite like how it sounds sounds now compared to before. It's not finished yet - so please let me know your critiques

(I cut out the 2nd half of the 2nd verse because I havent completely worked out how it should sound yet)

Also - here are the lyrics:

(Who cares if you 
Whisper to the dark).

(It might be fine,
As long as I don’t talk)

Staring out the window, and heading
Absolutely nowhere.
I’m sure it’s fine to dawdle. 

It seems the midnight fever has got a 
Viciously sweet demeanor.
Bartender, blur me out on dreams.

I like to think I’ve got a place
To run to.
Despite the pace that I’m falling past 
You at, right now.

I’m tumbling over my own 
Feet, at terminal velocity.
It’s lovely how the city slee-
-ps when I can’t catch a wink:

(Hey), why do these streetlights mimic
Your eyes, so well 

And why do these late nights
Make me ramble like hell.

The hands on the clock are ajar - and everything
Is as it shouldn’t be.
Is this really my reality?

I’m falling free through a 
Thick sea of irony
And it’s terrifying.

I’m barreling through my dreams at a
Breakneck speed.
I rather hate how my mood 
Swings when you’re around me.

(Hey), I just need more late nights, dancing un-
-der lead lights to forget what we’ve been through.

But somehow forgetting doesn’t seem like
The right thing to do.

I can’t laugh about it yet:
I guess the joke’s gone way over my head.

Hey - 
Sometimes I wish I’d lie in place of sly tries to
Dance around the truth: as much for myself, as for you.

You’re crashing into my real-
-ity at light-speed.
While you’re at it - take me far from this
Galaxy - I wanna see

(How) far I can go back - knowing a handful
Of my faults, and failures -

And maybe in my dreams - I’ll get to 
See that happy ending.

I can’t laugh about it 
yet: I guess the joke’s gone way over my

Head. Broken sense of humor 
hits - (hey) shut up, quit ramblin’

ramble

I really enjoy making music, because it's a way for me to communicate: and I hope you'll bare with me while I learn to express what I wish through song 😅.

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