I listened to it with great pleasure! Bravo!

It’s fab as it is, but I’d definitely revisit it and get it finished the way you want to...it deserves the time!👍🏻😄

Phil and I wrote this track a couple of years ago, but never completed. We have thought about going back to it, but have been side tracked by life and trying to write a House Song, which is not as easy as I thought.
I have written some new lyrics for it, because I thought the chorus was a bit dark. If anybody has the time would love to try and collaborate and finish it.
As it stands, we only did one vocal track, but I'm posting it because is December. and it has a Xmas feel, so please listen if you have time.
Thanks

Sandeep

These are the current lyrics.



The man in the moon sheds a tear

Verse 1

There's a place that I go just to be on my own
Where the woes of the world can't find me
There's a lake by a stream
Where the stars are so clear.
Makes the man in the moon shed a tear.

Verse 2

It's the place that I go when I'm thinking of you
I know  you can never be near
I dream that you kiss my lips 
And love's abundantly clear
Makes the man in the moon shed a tear.

Chorus

Shadow of a crater watching over me
Hiding all my fear
Guiding all my dreams
Like an orchestration
Where rhythm has a soul
hearts lose all control
shadow of a crater watching over me
shadow of a crater watching over me

You're not here, you're not there, but you're everywhere
Your soul is always in me
When I take a step
I feel that you're near
Makes the man in the moon shed a tear.


Chorus

Shadow of a crater watching over me
Shadow of a crater watching over me 

Repeat and fade.

THE MAN IN THE MOON SHEDS A TEAR - FIRST VERSION

This page is for the song writing partnership of 
Sandeep Issar and Phil Williams.
We have called the team "Movin'Flavour", after a lyric in The Gift by the Jam.
We will be posting our collaborations as they are written and composed.


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