what I've got so far in terms of chord progression and bass line. I'd like to alter the rhythms a little but I wanted you guys to know where I'm up to

Chordprogressionandbassline

I added some sax to the track to try and fill out the sound

Chordprogressionbasslineandsax

the really bad sounding keyboard thing is meant to be a voice and since my computer can't sing lyrics that's the best it can do. I got it in the structure of verse, verse, chorus, verse, chorus, bridge, chorus, chorus. I just want to get the lyrics in now then I will tweak the arrangement a little, and hopefully add little transitional pieces.

Diamondheistupdate5

With verse 2&3 melody added, intro added and variation in the bass line on the second time through the bridge. The parts where it seems like nothing is really happening or building I'm hoping to fill with singers and drum stuff.

SaxophoneChick