This just doesn't need all that reverb. It actually hides a lot of the loveliness of that melody. STRIP IT DOWN!

this totally gets more powerful and awesome right about here

dude, this is fucking great. this could be part of a movie soundtrack or something

This is close to sounding all dreamlike and folky but you've overdone the reverb and the mastering is off.

Lyrics:
Standing on your four legs
You wave your arms around
I'm a stranger in your stomach

You'll tear leaves from their branches
And throw us in our graves
And there's no coming back

Your heart beats in your chest
Swinging side to side
Moving quickly now

Noooooooo 
(sounds of feels)

Oh and it brings me down

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