Id say keys, this song doesnt need a guitar solo 

lower voice... then back to high because chorus is like talkin voice

Added extra layers here. 1 a 7th semitone up, the next an octave

still got to figure out for bass and guitar around here. thoughts/ideas?

re-recording vocals(of course) lower voice? or stick with this voice?

for radio edit, maybe just fade out before the heavy synth hits?

We should see what works best at 2.50 probably a keys solo But we can try guitar. For radio edit I think fade before synth. I dont think we need guitar at 3.56 I think just a Bass layer 

Rough basic outline of an extended song I was working on until someone stole my Macbook Pro. Thanks thief.
Vocals suck. Trust me, I don't like my own voice pretty much all the time, and can say that this is possibly one of the WORST recordings for a draft. VOMIT.

(Greatest Sleep pt.1)

i've awakened from the greatest sleep,
and i feel just fine right here lying by your side.
i've awakened, and i don't feel weak,
the blinding light reveals secrets underneath.

oh, and i've wandered, crawling through time,
and i've wondered if i'm even alive.

i've awakened now tell me do you see another side, of the promised me,
i've awakened and i cant feel a thing

"is this all i've wanted? is this the moment i've been waiting for?"

No.

(Solid Scream pt.2)

This is all I wanted, this is all I needed,
this is all I ever had, it's gonna be the very end of me.

I've awakened in a solid scream.
A twisted lie full of several broken things.
And I've mistaken this ecstasy,
for a time in which I held a dream.

THIS JUST A PASSING PHASE.
THIS JUST A PASSING PHASE.
THIS JUST A PASSING PHASE.
IS THIS JUST A PASSING PHASE?


Greatest Sleep/Solid Scream

Hello you, look up at me,
now back at thee, what did you see?
A simple replica of the one thing you did not wish to be.
This fleeting memory of things they've yet to see,
still in your wildest dreams, 
and you remember back in those days,
you were stuck in this phase,
of thinking you had something to say,
i still have something to say.

"build me up just like you"

from front to back, i'd move in  waves,
i couldn't keep track,
i'd slip, i'd fall, and all along,
no, i'd know nothing at all,
this loss of faith i cant erase,
my own own hate stains,
i'd stay unphased, the red remains,
now turns to pitch black

in the recesses of my mind
i start to realize,
ive drawn a thin line,
between the me i disapprove,
and the "you" i wish to lose,
theres only so much i could do.

"build me up just like you"

i got something that won't stop coming, and you're just nothing,
but standing in my way.

i got something that won't stop coming.
i got something that won't stop coming.
i got something that won't stop coming.
i got something that won't stop.

Replica (draft demo)

Dear summer skin,
I'm jumping inside you again
A little bit of whiskey,
and a splash of gin
Were out on rooftops
singing lets leave this town
but id rather stay right here
Get drunk and dance around

The minutes are ticking by so fast
if only the season cared to last

Let go, let go of my soul tonight
Hold on, hold on to that midnight sigh
We'll go, we'll go where our bodies like
We'll sleep under the stars tonight

Dear summer skin
I'm jumping inside you again
Pass me a cigarette
Fuck if it I said I truly quit
Were walking at sunset
Getting stares from everyone
True beauty in a town
Where hopes burn to the ground

The minutes are ticking by so fast
if only the season cared to last

Let go, let go of my soul tonight
Hold on, hold on to that midnight sigh
We'll go, we'll go where our bodies like
We'll sleep under the stars tonight

Replica (draft demo)

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