촉이와 (𝐂𝐚𝐧 𝐘𝐨𝐮 𝐅𝐞𝐞𝐥 𝐈𝐭?) Super Junior-D&E (𝙎𝙡𝙤𝙬𝙚𝙙 + 𝙍𝙚𝙫𝙚𝙧𝙗𝙚𝙙)

Hello! My first ever song uploaded to soundcloud! as expected, not gonna be the best creator out there, but if you can, please give some critics as i am trying to improve, thanks!