has a beatlesy vibe to it...  never a bad thing...  :)

nice tune man, appreciate the comment you left on ours :)

:) Love your mellow singing. And a great song this is!!

@sunnidayz: Cheers Sandy, sounds like you're rockin again :) thankyou

I really liked the tempo of the previous rough version of this. This is wonderful as well. I guess I mention this, as a novice songwriter, so please don't take this as anything other than a helpful comment. I tend toward speed as a way to hide the fact that I am a beginner when it comes to music, and am often hesitant about just doing a slow song that holds its own. Just felt the slower version of this tune was awesome is all.

The vocals are coool -great lyrics but they seem a bit rushed? Lovely clean recording and good guitars!! Peace :))

@sunnidayz: Thankyou Sandy, Had a mention of my old friend in this song too :) I find my guitar playing really erratic but I can live with it, thanks again you

Written as something as a nod to the PTSD I've only recently been diagnosed with, somewhat subconsciously it's a song about those feelings I have , and have had for thirty years now , never at peace with myself and therefore never been able to find that love within and without me.
This song is dedicated to Mark, Brian and Daniel, Whom without what they did to me wouldn't have been possible , those feelings I have wouldn't be there to experience and to write about . 

This notes for you .....


VERSE

Did you start your journey, off on the wrong foot?
Did you miss your turning, were you too afraid to look?
You’ll find the meaning, if it was meant to be,
You can stop the bleeding, if you can learn to see.

Did you keep the receipts, for all the lies you bought?
Did you hold on too tight to the perfect love you sought?
did you seek the freedom, as if was heaven sent,
Now you're at your crossroads, time to repent.


CHORUS

Your life’s a maze,
Can’t find your door,
Can’t find your freedom in this World.

When you find your peace,
Then you find your love,
Then you find your meaning in this World.


VERSE

Did you gain the respect, of all the ones you loved?
Did you rather defect, to fit your hand in Gloves?
Now you’re sat there alone, upon your stolen Throne,
Your back to the people, the ones you overthrown.

Did you waste your lifetime, to achieve your goals?
Did you check your mirrors, when you sold their souls?
Will you find your sunshine on the dark side of the Moon?
Spiral down your blackhole, because you went too soon.


CHORUS

Your life’s a maze,
Can’t find your door,
Can’t find your freedom in this World.

When you find your peace,
Then you find your love,
Then you find your meaning in this World

Your life’s a maze,
Can’t find your door,
Can’t find your freedom in this World.

When you find your peace,
Then you find your love,
Then you find your meaning in this World.

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