a re-working of one of my fav songs of longing and its peculiar grief

here are Tim Buckley's original lyrics, with a few tweaks from the recording:
Long afloat on shipless oceans
I did all my best to smile
'Til your singing eyes and fingers
Drew me loving into your isle

And you sang, "Sail to me, sail to me, let me enfold you"
Here I am, here I am waiting to hold you

Did I dream you dreamed about me?
Were you hare when I was fox?
Now my foolish boat is leaning,
Broken love lost on your rocks

And you said, "Touch me not, touch me not, come back tomorrow"
Oh my heart, oh my heart shies from the sorrow

Well I'm as puzzled as the oyster
And I'm as troubled as the tide
Should I stand amid the breakers?
Or should I lie with death my bride?
And you said, "Sing to me, sing to me, let me enfold you"
Here I am, Here I am waiting to hold you

Song to the Siren - Tim Buckley Cover

Moon River (Cover)

my spin on one of my fave car jam songs from one of my fave car jam bands.

silvin