These lyrics look great. The piano sound is jangly and upbeat, the vocal swims up the tide behind it. I think the vocalist might be out-louded by the backing. Still, great things lurking here.

SPOTIFY: https://open.spotify.com/track/6HiC2VgT8y63iYyoCKH0UU?si=cc33f499190341b3

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lyrics: 
for the better days, had to take a chance
made a mistake, but i cant change the past
in a couple years, we'll remember this and laugh
the consequences of my actions they keep falling down

i cant write a song no more, this coming from the heart
i guess you could say that I've been fukd up from the start
just for you, i been tryna get my message clear
just for you, i think that ive gotta face my fears

thinking out loud helps me cope, put my emotions into words
writing in my diary i cry, it feels like a blur
i see it clearly now, i hurt you and i hurt myself
sometimes i wanna fade away, dont know if you can tell

just wanna run away, run away from everything
yeah i been lost, but im waiting for the better days
just for you, give it my all for the better things
right now im goin up, they thought id never win

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