beautiful melody-- very hopeful feel, considering the subject... ( I heard that Day Tripper quote--- nice!)

Great song!  Love your lyrics and all that piano!

I really like the "shouldn't couldn't wouldn't" emphasis.  And the piano riff is very cool.  Its got such a good groove.

(verse 1)
One white pill
a Christmas gift he made
tucked away in a letter
to keep it safe
Floating in like snow
the phone calls and drop-bys
shoveling the powder
in nice clean lines

(chorus)
and I shouldn't
and I couldn't right now
what I wouldn't give for another release
a countdown

(verse 2)
One book of songs
a Christmas gift he gave
with a goodbye letter 
in a box sealed with tape
and you wanted to sing for me
and you wanted to buy me drinks

(chorus)
Well I think that you shouldn't
and you couldn't right now
what you wouldn't give for another release
a countdown

(bridge)
10, 9, 8.. All I really wanted was a chance to relate
I'm addicted to the fix from you
Then I'm running, now I'm running, see me running away

(chorus)
We shouldn't
and we couldn't right now
What we wouldn't give for another release (x2)


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