really nice voice, deborah! like the melody change at the end of the chorus too!

FREAKING beautiful.  SO SO SOOO GLAD to see you back in this semester.  to this day I still hum "Fiber Optic Heart", that is one of my favorite songs by a human being.  This song actually reminds me of it in very subtle ways.  Has that trademark sound.  Very ethereal though.  Love the piano tone you chose.  The end chord sounds to me like it could lead into a bridge.  soooooooooooo......future expansion?  the fan club wants more.  LOL.  okay seriously though what a joy to hear your writing again, this was SO nice.

Beautiful my friend! Good to hear you again.

Love to hear your music again, Deborah! I love your piano style.  I really like it when the rhythm in the piano picks up in the chorus.

hey there agin! vibe is the word-- nice to hear yours again too-- :)

hehe I love how we can hear you smiling :)

(Verse 1)
Tunnel vision got me, can't see nothin' clear
Flashing lights getting close in my rearview mirror
I've been reckless before but this time we're gonna collide
Slamming brakes, trading paint 'cuz I need you in my life

(Pre-Chorus)
Thanks for sticking by my side
For choosing this life
You make it easy to decide
That I want this too

(Chorus)
Crash course
On a crash course
crash coursing with you (x2)

crash coursing with you

(Verse 2)
You took the wheel I couldn't drive
I took your hand and closed my eyes
Put us through a wreck we couldn't hide
Counted slowly to ten, opened up again
You're still standing ready to start a brand new life 

(Pre-Chorus)
(Chorus)

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