Nice prosody in your chorus.  I like the wraparound lyrics and your phrasing.

The variety of musical instruments in the accompaniment is really fun and energizing. Love how you fit the lyrics into the melody.

this is great. really cool groove and the flow of the lyrics is superb. I'd get "dizzy and light" spitting out words that fast.

this is fantastic.  so many layers and instruments.  I'm waiting for the drums to drop here.  still moving around and infected by the groove and the silky smooth soul.  the drums never dropped.....  and yet it still gets you out of your chair.  so strong Deb.  such innovative stuff.  obviously the soulful melodies are gonna hit me like ton of bricks.   really bowled over by the choices here - extremely artistic.

What's your name love?
Where you came from?
If you're going, can I come?

Don't need drinkin'
whatcha thinkin?
How do you have fun?

Do you get high?
Can we talk awhile?
Don't be shy

It's the way you dress
the way you smile
carry yourself
I get high lookin' at ya
drownin' my senses
dizzy and light
floating and fine
it feels right
fallin' for ya 
come on closer
I won't bite
do you feel the same?
I just want to know your name

Uber, taxi
front or backseat
Heading west or east?

Getting loud here
It's a crowd, dear
Next flight to Paris
can we leave?

Can we get high?
Can we talk all night?
Don't be shy

(Chorus)

I've been alone for some time
We can take it slow
I can't help wanting more
I'm losing focus

(Chorus)

Comments

Mark Magram

sleep in late

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Susan Veit Heslin

Don Mercer 2020