Good stuff - enjoying the E-guitar skill on this !

This reminds me of Crosby Stills Nash and Young

It's a nice blues, I like the guitar, but it really could use some drums

Great fun track, a touch of Mungo Jerry perhaps? PS that Lucozade bottle makes all the difference, brown or white rice?

Nice take on the blues, really interesting

this one is great my friend.... luv it... 🤘✌️😁....🙏🙏🙏


Move over, honey. I'm working to feeling fine.
I've done messing around. It's my time to shine.

Cos you won't stop me moving on down the line.
And I'm not planning on wasting any more time.

So come here, honey, turn the lights down low.
I've already missed out the first half of the show. 

A cadillacs just fantasy.
And i'm not getting what I need.
Find it hard, to remember.
I'm not waiting, till November.

My mental health anxiety.
Ain't getting  me what I might need.
I'm hungry, and there's other mouths to feed.

So come over, honey, you know it's all for show.
I'm lonely, and I've got nowhere else to go. 

A place to sleep some food to eat.
But I'm not getting what I need.
Find it hard to remember.
I'm not waiting till November.

At the end of the night, we're all living in fantasies.
Created to fulfil one of our many needs.
We're out of step.
But it's just fine.
It might get better down the line.
We're out of steam
And out of time.

Moveover

We are the music makers. We are the dreamers of dreams.





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