@agnosturaelwar: Thanks Ingvar - I tried to come up with something alien & cold :)

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haiku #340: All across the sky / A star has burned itself out / Above the cold sea

5th variation on Mozart's Piano Sonata No.11 (i) for Piano and Strings

How to Hold Her

[Verse 1]
She doesn’t always speak
when her world turns upside down—
sometimes she leaves the room
without taking her body with her

I want to follow frantic
like a child who broke something inside
but I’ve learned some storms
are meant to be watched from the doorway

[Pre-Chorus]
She’s got a past that knocks at my heart
wearing my voice my face my blame—
it’s unfair but fear doesn’t care
it just wants her to stay alive

[Chorus]
So I stay soft
like a blanket left on the couch
like a song low enough
to calm her heart down
She doesn’t have to speak
doesn’t have to explain—
my love will wait
my love will remain

[Verse 2]
When her breath starts to break
I whisper how to count again
Some days my love’s a lighthouse
some days just an open hand

And when she returns
fragile apologetic slow—
I tell her this isn’t her fault
she never has to glow

[Bridge]
Healing doesn’t always look like peace
sometimes it’s just staying
just not wanting
to be alone tonight

[Chorus]
So I stay soft
like a blanket left on the couch
like a song low enough
to calm her heart down
she doesn’t have to speak
doesn’t have to explain—
my love will wait
my love will remain

[Outro]
And when she breathes again
I’ll be right there—
quiet still
showing her how to hold the air

How to Hold Her

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I Am More than Delighted to share the fruit of my first collaboration with Orchestration Maestro Jeffrey J. Torres! To my Ear... it's Oh so delicious.

Jeff's intuitive understanding of the Pulse and Flow of this Piano Improv takes it to a level I've only dreamed of. I sincerely hope that we will work together again. 

p.s. And fact we have since .... Listen to @ Gary-courtland-miles – Oases-of-joy-featuring-jeff-torres   )

To enJoy more of Jeff's very fine work, venture over to @jtcmposr

Piano, Composition, Performance, and Orchestration
© Gary Courtland-Miles and Jeff Torres 2025

The Dancing Wu Li Masters *

A companion piece to "Beneath the Forest" and "Enchanted Forest Dance."

The Forest Sleeps – by Francess Harris

The moon is full, the snow is deep,
The forest creatures, fast asleep,
Though skies are dark and harsh winds blow,
The stars shine down on peace below.
 
For in this season, time stands still,
With nothing else to do until,
Spring arrives and melts the snow,
And new life sprouts and starts to grow.

For now, beneath the frozen ground,
Rest prevails and dreams abound,
‘Til winter winds all blow away,
The forest sleeps ‘til Spring’s first day.
--------------------------------------------------------------
Poem & Original Composition by Francess Harris - Copyright 2025
All Rights Reserved.

The Forest Sleeps

Komposition988 SchalgzeugKlavierStreicher

Wanting And Not Wanting

Lied 7/2

Memories

e guitar improvisation

Austria

All across the sky
A star has burned itself out
Above the cold sea

haiku by Inan
picture by Jarrod Pimental https://unsplash.com/@jarrodpimentals

For more information visit http://www.naviarrecords.com/about/naviar-haiku

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halF burnouT [naviarhaiku340]

Made for Naviar Records' 340th Haiku Challenge. Details and other inspirations at https://www.naviarrecords.com/2020/07/08/naviarhaiku340-all-across-the-sky/

Burning star [naviarhaiku340]

This track was created for the Naviar Haiku group.
340week haiku
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https://www.naviarrecords.com/2020/07/08/naviarhaiku340-all-across-the-sky/

2020-07-09

Above the cold sea ( Naviarhaiku 340 )

9Jul20

My naviarhaiku340 submission
https://www.naviarrecords.com/2020/07/08/naviarhaiku340-all-across-the-sky/
:D

Above the cold sea [naviarhaiku340]

Composed and performed by Daniel Diaz, July 2020.

Stratocaster electric guitars
Synthesizers
Electric piano
Acoustic guitars
Ukulele
Voices

Music for this haiku:

All across the sky
A star has burned itself out
Above the cold sea
 
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@naviar-records


haiku by Inan
photo by jeremy thomas

all across the sky  (naviarhaiku340)

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Above the cold sea [naviarhaiku340]

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