bumping into this one again --man I think it's really so good Steve!

Great song Steve - hearing some Dylan in there :)

outstanding songwriting.......cool vocal performance!

Great song Steve. Love the sad lyrics. Sung with feeling.

great song Steve, great singing ,i love it

Some lovely geetar touches both acoustic and electric on this track Steve. Again, something that you do so well, a really catchy chorus.

Watered Down

This time apart I notice your messaging
Only seems to be you answering back
Nothing from you with spice
Everything nice nice nice
When I need you to scream

Yeah don’t come back watered down
I want the force of you to pin me down 
I want all of your potency
Cause a watered down you 
I cannot believe

Been diving so deep into the ocean
That sticky salt spray burning our eyes
Been licking the salt off your skin
You feeling me flood right in
We burst at the seams 

Please don’t come back watered down . . .

Day paralysed clutching my phone
Picking out holes in things you don’t say
Feeling the tide ebb away
I’m living a grey rainy day
Down on a knee

Please . . .
So . . .

WATERED DOWN

Playing live and writing & recording in Nelson New Zealand - began recording in 2004 once technology was available to make CDs using industry standard equipment at home. Radio airplay on Fresh FM and the TLC network from 2005. The track IS THIS WHO I THINK IT IS was a finalist in the 2009 NZ MLT songwriting contest.  In Dec 2012  DUNEDIN SOUND reached  no. 26 on NZ on Air "The Audience" chart. In December 2015, RIP OFF THE SCAB and DREAM DESTINATION were selected by a US A&R agent for promotion to artists, In July 2017 - HIGHEST ROOM also picked up by a US agent for promotion. July 2018 DON'T YOU TURN AWAY selected by NY agent to promote to a London soul singer. August 2018 LOVE MY LIFE assigned to BuyNZ audiovisual advertising. December 2018 WHERE CIGARETTES FALL forwarded by Taxi.com to US TV music director. Latest album SLEEPS ON FIRE seeks to marry Leonard Cohen Imagery with Steely Dan musical movement. Daytime job is in anaesthesiology and healthcare leadership.
2024 FLOATING INTO WONDER on a New Foundland radio station.

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