I think this version works better, John. A definite improvement!

An unusual approach to winning her heart, but yoz make it work

stone_j bass hits right🔥, you need real fans, we got you check the page

IHO the remix manages to put a little different spin on the lyrics. The bounce in the track gives it a little smile.

I revisited the previous version and then listened to this one. I like the added instruments; the previous version was great, but this one is even better.

...this version makes the chorus much more expressive. Great additions, John! 👍👋

The Patron Saints of Broken Dreams (John Stone)

A remix with some added orchestration

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I want her
I need her
But more than anything I have to believe her
When she says that almost  anyone 
Would be better than me

I tried it
Can’t hide it
Every trick in the book
I applied it
But I’ve run out of inspiration
And you’re the last chance I can see

St Jude, St Rita
The patron saints of broken dreams
Look down and help me out of this
No matter how impossible it seems

Gregory and Philomena
You can help out too
Though here on earth my cause is lost
Perhaps between the four of you 
There something you’ll agree
That can bring her back to me

Rejected
Neglected
No matter what I was never accepted
Even though I tried almost anything
Any time of the day

I praised her
Amazed her
But nothing I ever did ever phased her
Rejecting all my romantic advances
Simply turning away

So I call upon the
Patron saints of broken dreams
To listen out for me
My cause may seem impossible
But you’re the only hope I see
And  I’ll believe in miracles if you can make her see
That I’m the only one for her
The only one she’ll ever love is me


The Patron Saints of Broken Dreams (Remix)

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