This theme that keeps returning - it sounds to me like it's out of key or out of tune or something. The sections in between are fine (but less ambitious)

solid track. could use a bit more variation and change of sound. also try putting a clipper over your drums and increasing the gain a bit. might make them pop a bit harder.

super 90s. watch that dissonance. although it's sort of your trademark - so would be a shame to lose it actually 😂

sorry, but another super-big kick, which is kind of distracting.... there have been a few of those this month.  The rest of the music is good but it's hard to focus beyond that thump.

I like this - wish you had let it climb and climb and climb though.

There's a lot to like about this track. The sounds sit nicely together, and the progression has a nice flow to it. I think, as others have said, sharpening some of the sounds and expanding the places where you take the music might help you get to the next level.

Synth DX7 - The Prime Revolution 2 (OSC #196 Syntorial Primer 2)

I have no degree in audio engineering but I learned through watching YouTube. I participate in the KVR One Synth Challenge. My first OSC was 169 which started on March 2023.

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