It would nice to have more melodies over the aprs.  A lot of this song sounds like a good backing for something.

I don't "synchronize" to these melodies, to much old video games for my taste

your track had potential but was let down by being too robotic while also not feeling like the elements are working together

On the whole too mechanical, indeed. Why not use at least the velocity sensitivity of the synth to make it more lively?  How these muted keys here drop in was a nice surprise, btw.

My 2nd song in the KVR One Synth Challenge.

KVR Results
Ranking: 30/30

Song Information
DAW: Cakewalk
Synth: OctaSine (13)
Internal FX:
- EQ (13)
External FX:
- kHs Compressor (2)
- kHs Delay (2)
- kHs Dual Delay -(1)

SynthDX7 - Four FM Fantasy (OSC #170 OctaSine)

I have no degree in audio engineering but I learned through watching YouTube. I participate in the KVR One Synth Challenge. My first OSC was 169 which started on March 2023.

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