Good work! Seems a bit like a mix of ideas. Got a great groove with it. My suggestion would be to try and make the snare slap a bit harder; get it to cut through the mix with some sidechaining. I think it’s fighting against the arp.

I think the song sounds like a great backing to something more. some great key changes and changes of sound. l like the kick rhythms. I think a soaring lead/melody over the top somewhere would be great - for my tastes.

I think use of some form of motif to tie the parts of a track this together would improve. As it is, parts are pretty well made, even if a bit stark for my taste, but rather too loosely connected, imho.  To the point that it feels like a different track is starting here.

This is a nice part, this little arp is nice

I agree with the others - this is a good track with some strong elements.  I tend to make tracks with many sections and making the transactions work is always a challenge and it's easy to fail (as I often do)  But lots of this is fun and it's nice to hear a to of ideas.

A nice classic sound here!  I'll agree with others that you have some nice ingredients to work with here, but it needs editing to allow it to better tell a musical story.

As it was already mentioned, this feels more like a kind of mashup with the best of the 90s. You still have created solid soundscape with a lot of the classic 90's Rave/Techno/Trance/ I still don't understand musicgenres sounds. Eventhough it feels like a mashup I still enjoyed it. Well done :) And btw: Your entry actually inspired me to do a 90s "Das Modul"-like track  for next month :P

interesting techno/rave track, I like the distorted kick, I wish sometimes filters could be open bit more to bring in some highend to the mix. otherwise nicely done

Song Info

DAW:
Tracktion Waveform Free 12.5.11

Synth:
Vital (11)

Internal FX:
None

External FX:
MEqualizer (9)
MAutopan (2)
kHs Trance Gate (1)

Analyzing:
SPAN (4)
WaveObserver (3)

Mastering:
TDR VOS SlickEQ (1)
SPAN (1)
LoudMax (1)

SynthDX7 - Vital Virus Visions (OSC #179 Vital)

I have no degree in audio engineering but I learned through watching YouTube. I participate in the KVR One Synth Challenge. My first OSC was 169 which started on March 2023.

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