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MOST IMPORTANT: Kick isnt following the bassline, it should!…

well, a lot has to happen but try to work on the feedback an…

here the vocal does seem to fit

sooo much white noise :P

this transition is nice

better transition but still vocal mmhh

again, i dont think the vocal is in the right place

be sure that the kick, punch get room in the mix

transition again difficult to follow

maybe a bit less white noise, and the melo almost fits, but …