The way interupt yourself is cool and the energy and vibe is A+ the vocal effects would work really well especially with this beat but i cant understand what your saying easily the delivery is okay but its let down by the pen game 

@pinkpolofur: personally I thought the mix was decent, but I've never been especially good at it😅. yeah its hard to understand me sometimes I agree. I really appreciate the feedback, what would u rate it out of 10.

@user-337850042: well I mean cool. thanks for listening

aye I fw ur flow bros, lmk if u wanna do a ft! 

Chorus 
I’m back with the second one
My energy here is second to none
When you’re done with the tune I’ll leave you stunned
You’ll spark like a light just by my touch
It’s time for the flow switch
Break you down like a glowstick 
I dash through I’m so quick 
Controlling you like a joystick
Wait it’s time to turn around
I got my canines they’re in the compound
My rap skill is like a touchdown
Now this is what happens at the countdown
What you’re about to witness
Is the act of being diminished
I’m the suspect but I’m not suspicious
Just like Vegeta I broke through my limits

Verse 1:
I’m about to redefine
The meaning of DNA being combined
Imma past you within a blink of an eye
Because I see through your scheme 
I’m the mastermind
God is a myth
But I’m feeling so divine
I ordered death 
It took a whole life time
I’m a mad man just like Rick Grimes
Fight through the night
Things can blow like a mine
The music is changing
From big and small views have been ranging
And I am sustaining
The title of being inflaming
It’s time for the new rhyme
I got to reach new levels 
Yes I must climb
I won’t stop now
I’m in my prime time
Can’t quit till I’m a big time

EXCLAIM! REMASTERED! (prod.ThatKidGoran)

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