Your voice kind of hides in the mix and makes a a little hard to understand the lyrics.   I like your style though it's very unique 

This was good, but the voice is too muddy.

I agree w what the others said. Vocals were lacking. Unfortunately your talent matches your name

Everything about your lyrics is unique and I like that a lot but your mix is lacking. Without your lyrcis down below I wouldn't understand a thing. So your mix definitely needs work and I'd say try to not mumble as much. I hope you're doing alright mate, you're talking about some pretty serious things here.

Lyrics are excellent. The vocal mix could be improved but I actually don't think it's a huge issue. Main thing for me is that I'm not feeling the flow. That's a really personal thing and so I don't want to criticize, but for me it's not lining up with the natural rhythm of the language.

on the right track lyrically but the delivery and mixing needs work, i liked more than i didnt like just be more confident and keep grinding

Ye bru i like the flow bro, but again add some variety with vocal tone, othef than that bars are hard, keep up the good work

This took a lot longer than I wanted it to.
Lyrics:

Chorus (0:10)
Students not thinking the same
They got us divided
Torn into major groups
Pushing standards,as if we haven’t been trying
Bashing heads into TBs
Out out of gas they tire out
Some of them like this shit
The rest envision them dropping out
Have their own problems
This shit don’t make that easier
Hard to commit to it
School take a toll on their health
Work piling down on me
Crashing down like a meteor
They instruct how to be a bot
I’ve come here to be a boss

Verse 1
Been taught all the useless shit
I think it’s safe to admit
I’ve thrown these mental misfits
Put a risk to one's wrist
I feel no need to persist
How can I go on?
Forced to study till the crack of dawn
I feel like I’m sinking
They’re happiness shrinking
Force you the 9-5
Work till I’m sleep deprived

Teachers not satisfied
I’m locked in these cages
Giving me minimum wages
I’m lost in this maze
I am aware that it’s all a phase but
This shit getting harder 
Yet I appear as if I’m not phased
I’m told it’s the only way 
I feel I am let astray 
Like my work didn’t get displayed
It’s not evidential
That this shit is essential 
I feel like school stole from me
And I’m feeling revengeful 
This shit is tearing me apart
I’m about to go mental

Verse mixed by: https://soundcloud.com/matiss2s

Hallways Of Hell (prod.AngelLaCiencia Beats)

Youtube: https://www.youtube.com/channel/UCi5mLZGuJUawhuIt6IlfQdQ/videos

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