some dude posted this on a reddit comment, and it sucks. not even good. what a waste.

I peeped the track, because getting your name out is rough. I can respect the flow a little, but you have the exact same flow/delivery in every set. It needs a little variation, throw in some triplets, or a little double time segment with some internal rhyme that ends with a normal time punchline, something to keep the listener moving with the song. when the UP BEAT is the ONLY THING in the RHYME SCHEME it's a Let down. Like that scheme is nice for parts of a song, but not all.   Beyond that, it was decent. I'm not huge on rap that's just about bragging/showing off, I want to hear a story, or have some feeling elicited. I think you have a good grasp of putting down a beat and matching a verse to it. I checked a few other tracks, much better flow variance. LA is my Town is a sick beat, and a nice flow, but damn if the bass isn't overpowering. A little cut in the mix and it would have a lot more space.  Keep up the hustle man, rock on.

Dude is absolutely a walking flu, makes me wanna throw up and vomit 🤮 

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Album: Space Stuff Single 
Artist: ChaosDesigned
Label: Savage Cat Entertainment
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