Replaces the earlier demo. Still not a full-length track, but new vocals/lyrics recorded on a better microphone, and different drum track (though timing's still a bit off).

Lyrics: 

We trade broken words
An exchange of lies
Is it foolish? Is it wrong
To dream of hope

The Fool (Partial Demo)

EDIT: This vocal line and the emo lyrics have no been shitcanned. Leaving this up for posterity's sake.

Lyrics so far: 

If I believe in love
Perhaps I am the fool
But maybe that's alright with me

To waste your time on hatred
Only brings more pain
Just let it go and this will pass

(Untitled) Piano Demo With First Verse Vocal Sketch

Mastering/Mixing is all fucked up still, should probably re-record vocals in various places to make them suck less and sound more cohesive, and the piano bridge at the end needs something, and idk what I'm doing tbh.

Lyrics: 

you spent your life in darkness
within the night in your mind
you took the hand you found there
now in the light you're left alone

you'll see them out there
basking without fear
they're starting to fly
too close to the sun
they're starting to fly
too close to the sun

you watched them rise so high
and waited for your wings
now lingering in darkness
the sunlight only stings

and through the endless night
they'll come home
they'll come home to you
and with their broken wings
they'll come home
they'll come home to you

Too Close to the Sun - WIP

Just a crazy cat dude with a keyboard and a microphone making some terrible sounds.

The Weary Luddite

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