Really like you brought that legato string part back from the beginning at 1:40. The song is slower, but it still has this drive to it. It feels like someone saying something sad through but with clenched fists. Props for not falling into any cliche rhyme schemes, it definitely added to the tension not having each line rhyme.

Oooh, such a cool take on the prompt, Tim! Fascinating lyrics, and liking the arrangement as well. Nicely done.

This has a pretty melody which along with the fingerpicking have a nice contrast with the dark feel of the lyrics.

Really like the finger picked guitar emerging from the intro sounds and the way that the song builds again from the middle. It develops really weel and keeps your interest with its variety. I like the unusual meter on the twisted projector line.

really lovely soundscape in this one -great work :)

that bowed/feedback-like sound is a really beautiful texture in this! also beautiful lyrics!

Wow! This is definitely in same league as CSN&Y and Paul Simon. Love everything about it, from the guitar picking, to the harmonies and the interesting harmonic variations. Beautiful!

This moved me immensely, I loooove the soundscape aspect.

Songaweek Week 34
songaweek.org theme: Shape of your shadow
r/songaweek theme: Reverb

Aren't we peculiar 
Aren't we estranged
Aren't we indifferent
Aren't we unchanged


The look on your face 
The shape of your shadow
A twisted projection of your soul
The gestures you make
The sound of your echo
A twisted projection of your soul


2x
Please tell me 
what you think  and
Please show me
what you got
I'm on the
brink of losing hope

For gooo_ooood


Aren't we audacious
Aren't we afraid
Aren't we imprudent
Aren't we astray

Shape of your shadow

The one of the Bremen Town Musicians that everyone forgot.

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