Chorus to a song in progress - Feedback is awesome

Pencil

This is just an intro to a song i've been working on, Will be released later on in the month!

Intro Teaster

Just a bit more work done on the track, just about finished the introduction now. this is still pretty much raw!

Intro with added vocals and guitar!

This is the final upload of the introduction from my solo project, the rest of the song is in working progress and will be released at the end of the month. Any feedback i can get from this would be awesome so i can get some ideas for what to do with the rest/other tracks. Hope you all enjoy!

TomLeach