I hope you do take this further with production, it's really strong. Finally, I hear the third Donahue brother. Great stuff!

Love these lines. I want to run, it's all too much. Afraid that I might really fuck this up.

Great upbeat groove. Very danceable for sure! :) Love the chorus; I think we all feel afraid in relatiosnhip to some degree and feel like running at times. Thanks for writing and sharing,

TIGHT!  bobbing my head from the get-go here.  catchy up-tempo melody.  dreamy lead vocal with those heavy reverb effects.  and yeah the lyrics are truly inspired man.  killer.  I can see why you want to enshrine this one for that reason.  if/when you do, consider bringing the "band" to the party.  Drums and bass entering in around 1:47 would really set this thing off.  awesome performance here solo though.  had me swaying along.  great job on this!

Great percussive strum and beat.  The more dreamy and drawn out vocals sound great in contrast with the guitar.   You did a great job in the lyrics showing uncertainty in a relationship - so relatable also.

While I don't know what's in your head production-wise, it feels pretty apparent.  I'd be curious to hear if your thoughts would jibe with mine.  Favorite lyric couplet: like the northern lights you're guiding me home/Is your magnet real, or is my compass blown?  Nice imagery.

Man, great vocals and playing. I love the reverb effect on the track.

i'm really enjoying the lyrics and am a little blown away and only slightly envious at your being able to say that you just put it all together at the last second!

Drown me in amber ... damn! That's a great line. So evocative.

Wanderin' down this aimless road.
Got no direction, no sense of where to go.
Like the northern lights, baby you're guiding me home.
Is your magnet real, or is my compass blown?

I want to run, it's all too much.
Afraid that I might really fuck this up.
Do you really love me, or you got magic touch?
Drown me in amber baby, yeah seal us up.

You want to shower me baby, well I need to know.
When you say you're leaving, are you coming home?
All of our hesitance falls like leaves to the floor.
You tell me madly, but what if I need more?

I want to run, it's all too much.
Afraid that I might really fuck this up.
Do you really love me, or you got magic touch?
Drown me in amber baby, yeah seal us up.

I want to run, it's all too much.
Afraid that I might really fuck this up.
Do you really love me, or you got magic touch?
Drown me in amber baby, yeah seal us up.

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