Hey I like your song. It had a good vibe and pulled off being dubby without brostepping it up (which I appreciate) and you also managed to glitch it - but tastefully and not trying too hard. Some of the things I saw needed change are: the piano-type synth that's in the intro is definitely clipping or overdriven way too hard I feel like the synth from the beginning should either go away and be replaced on the breakdown in the middle or layered with something. Anything to make it stand out from what it originally was, I think would do the sound some justice. Maybe consider adding something else or replacing something in the second verse. It doesn't feel as though there is enough change. Towards the end when it gets simpler, I like that. I would put that as my intro. I also like the flangey organ synth, but maybe some slight filtering to go along with? Maybe some slight layering? Otherwise I thought the mix was decent and the arrangement is simple and direct.

You've come along way bud! This is great! Keep it up!

This is the song I created for "Claude's Construction Contest" using the sample pack he made (Claudes Construction Kit Vol.1), along with some of my own production and sound desgin. Shoutout to Claude VonStroke for the fun contest! Enjoy!

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All Night (Original Mix)

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Got It Bad

2 Late

Triangles

Sometimes bad luck will get you down,
but stick around my friends, 
it will turn around again.
Sometimes back luck can kick you round, 
just tough it out my friends,
it'll turn around the bend.

No New Friends

One for the killer
Young Ha for the hot shit,
Ive been passionate about the wrong shit.
Omg they been flossin',
Fuck the beat and let me drop what prob' is.

One For The Killers

Forget him if he doesn't love you. 
Forget him if he doesn't care. 
Maybe I'm paranoid,
maybe I just don't care enough.
Maybe you just don't seem to give a fuck. 
Am I in my head again?

Paranoid

Across the valleys carved by Odin lies a river lined with blood. 
A master trained by time.
A man who even god misunderstood. 
Magic honed in war from land torn by feud. 
A battle rages through the ages. 
The Prophecy Is True.

Prophecy

All this money drenched in blood.
All these bones burned by sun.
I thought I'd won.
All these dollars spent by us. 
All this money I thought was mine. 
I know I know. 
Imma take it with me when I die.

Take It With Me

The Luchadore

They don't call out to their god no.
They don't hold onto their sorrow. 
sweet lords undead. 
They are un-whole without you. 
I feel like a fucking Zombie. 
Im alive. 
Like to drink, yea I drink.
Like to move, yes I do.
Like to dance, no I cant. 
God damn then, who the fuck are you. 
I've got a problem with you.

Habitat

Zombay

Truman Delgado is an Electronic & Hip Hop influenced multi-genre musician from America.

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