can i get honest criticism on my new song, its called unwanted. im just tryna get better

keep up the work moon. shits good. like this real shit. 

Dying On The Inside (Prod.NiNETY8)

DONT WANNA BE HERE ANYMORE

A firey new track from up & coming artist LuvKari

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