3 min improve with extra structure

Time Is Up  - 04/06/2022, 18.31.mp3

strings outside - 04/06/2022, 16.04.mp3

There is a background recording of the sea i took before and had never used... silence of nature ✌️

The Silence PROMPT 8 Acrostic writing

Verse
I  walk  through  the  forest    
I  sit  on  a  fallen  tree  
wounder  about    
what  I  see:    
a  little  ant,  a  wooden  bench,    
different  colours  within
a  sun  and  shadowing  
And  then  it  starts  to  rain 

Chorus 
I’m feeling blinded by the clouds above my head 
I’m feeling frozen ‘cause I’m standing here alone 
The clouds are crying the tears I hide
I’m falling
Please bring me back the light

Verse
They’re  sharing  their  dinner  
in  a  cosy,  luxurious  place  
laughing  and  talking  
no  time  or  space    
they  see  each other  again,    
tomorrow  maybe  
 I  wished  that  I  was  there.  
and  then  it  starts  to  rain 

Chorus (2x)
I’m feeling blinded by the clouds above my head 
I’m feeling frozen ‘cause I’m standing here alone 
The clouds are crying the tears I hide
I’m falling
Please bring me back the light

Bridge 
I  have  to  change. 
I  don’t  want  this  no  more  
couldn’t  rely  on  myself 
I was crying for help 
I tried it all 
So  whatever  it  takes 
I will do anything
I  will change! 
I  will change!  

Chorus (2x)
I’m feeling blinded by the clouds above my head 
I’m feeling frozen ‘cause I’m standing here alone 
The clouds are crying the tears I hide
I’m falling
Please bring me back the light

The Light (demo)

Spare

Alice

A song that came out of a verbal improvisation.

Better As Friends

hidden scotland

Faith In Me (Gordon Thomson)

Songwriter


Part 1
I don’t want to be a songwriter, songwriter no way
But I guess I don’t have a choice, it’s in my DNA

I don’t want to be a songwriter, songwriter not me
If I could be anything else, that’s what I would be.

I don’t want to be a songwriter, it takes up too much of my time
And I have to do clever things like find an non obvious rhyme for time

I don’t want to be a songwriter, songwriting’s a chore
All you ever do is write songs and then you write more and more and more and more

Middle 8
In the early hours in the middle of the night, deserted by Terpsichore
Haunted by the nightmares that come flooding through my sleep - my audience is sick of me, 
sick of me….. and I agree.

Part 2
I don’t want to be a songwriter, try to cease and desist
Then I get this rabid urge in me, one I cannot resist 

So I guess that I’m a songwriter, it’s just as I feared - but
I don’t want to be a songwriter, songwriters are weird 

I don’t want to be a songwriter, songwriter no sir
Now no-one needs to be a songwriter. Cos that’s what AI is for (apparently)

I don’t want to be a songwriter, but it’s the way I’ll stay
Guess I’ll always be a songwriter, it’s in my DNA ,DNA

Songwriter Ragbag Ver1 Ruff Piano Demo. FAWM1

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