First attempt at making a full verse, I avidly follow music and work on bettering myself everyday and have for about 2 years, I still have a long way to go but any advice is very welcomed, thank you.
*sorry for the poor audio quality it helps mask my nervousness but it wasn't intentional. C:
here's the beat https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=tU5cXW_Qutw

My First 16 Bars

Trying to add more to my flow and delivery, this is a rant about some people I judged poorly and caused a ton of problems for me even currently. All feedback, advice and constructive criticisms greatly appreciated.
here's the beat https://youtu.be/4ZtnGtv_b_s

Rant

Messin around, trying to make something with a good flow

Here's the beat https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=-o3hiRz1Zwk

new sense