You got it going on! Great harmonies, cool guitar, fun lyrics (well, fun because you make 'em that way in your delivery), and spot on attitude. Yep, love your spirit! ✌️🤙

Super song Jim , sorry about SC problem , but Charlotte helped me out bless her !

this is great Jim .. loving the old styles

Cool track with a really fun vibe. Like this one a lot.

The line about inside out clothes and shoes on the wrong feet is great 👍

great track and singing here Jeff , I listen to this when the sun is out ! xx

Yihaa that sounds excellent and makes me smile big

What a fun song and cool groove Jimmy. Very catchy tune. Nice guitar solo too.

This is a comic song that I wrote in 2021 during the pandemic. It's very basic, me playing an old rock & roll kinda song. Very light and funny! It's kinda structured like an old Chuck Berry song, the pioneering poet of Rock & Roll! Sorry about the vocal, I did my best! The video is brand new, finished it a few months ago. The video follows that storyline pretty closely and it's humorous. It's about moments that make you shrug your shoulders and say "why even bother?" I hope everybody likes it. Thanks for stoping by and leave a comment. Cheers!🍻🥂

VIDEO - https://youtu.be/g9oUcpFG77U

“MAKES ME WONDER”

I CRAWLED OUT OF BED WITH A HEADACHE IN MY EYE,      
MY MOUTH FELT LIKE A DESERT,      
MY BRAIN FELT CHICKEN-FRIED,        
STUBBED MY TOE ON THE DRESSER,                   
SO HARD IT MADE ME CRY,      
HUMM MAKES ME WONDER, MAKES ME WONDER WHY,      
MAKE ME WONDER WHY, THE HELL DO I, EVEN TRY!

WHEN IT COMES TO DATING WOMEN, I'M LAST IN MY CLASS,      
GET ALL TONGUE-TIED AND SWEATY,       
ALWAYS FUMBLING THE PASS,       
BRING THEM SWEETS AND FLOWERS,      
THEY JUST LOOK AT ME AND LAUGH,      
HUMM MAKES ME WONDER, MAKES ME WONDER WHY,      
MAKES ME WONDER WHY, THE HELL DO I, EVEN TRY!
           
GOD ALMIGHTY,           
YOU KNOW I'VE NEVER ASKED FOR MUCH,           
IT AIN'T RIGHT, EVERY FRIDAY NIGHT,             
EVERYBODY GIVES ME THE BRUSH,
     
I STRUGGLE THROUGH THE NIGHT,     
I STUMBLE THROUGH THE DAY,      
PUT MY CLOTHES ON INSIDE OUT, MY SHOES ON THE WRONG WAY,     
MY FAMILY HAVE DISOWNED ME,         
AND MY FRIENDS ALL MOVED AWAY,     
HUMM MAKES ME WONDER, MAKES ME WONDER WHY,     
MAKES ME WONDER WHY, THE HELL DO I, EVEN TRY!

GOD ALMIGHTY,           
YOU KNOW I'VE NEVER ASKED FOR MUCH,           
IT AIN'T RIGHT, EVERY FRIDAY NIGHT,             
EVERYBODY GIVES ME THE BRUSH,
     
I STRUGGLE THROUGH THE NIGHT,     
I STUMBLE THROUGH THE DAY,      
PUT MY CLOTHES ON INSIDE OUT, MY SHOES ON THE WRONG WAY,     
MY FAMILY HAVE DISOWNED ME,         
AND MY FRIENDS ALL MOVED AWAY,     
HUMM MAKES ME WONDER, MAKES ME WONDER WHY,     
MAKES ME WONDER WHY, THE HELL DO I, EVEN TRY!     
MAKES ME WONDER WHY, THE HELL DO I, EVEN TRY!
                                            
BY JIM VALDES © 2021

COBWEBS OF TIME

"MAKES ME WONDER" [Video - https://youtu.be/g9oUcpFG77U]

Hi everybody, my name is Jim and I’m a songwriter, I've written over 300 songs, I play guitar, bass, piano, and am an OK lyricist.  I play all types of music and have my own recording studio.  I use no A.I. or DAW or any computers to make my songs, all the instruments are played by me live on a multitrack studio recorder and Charlie, my vocalist, sings most of my songs and also plays the Harmonica on several tracks. I'm not a pro or a great musician but I do what I can with the tools that I have! I belong to the "Keep Humans In Music Movement"! Thanks everyone for listening and the world needs more music now, real music made by HUMANS not MACHINES! So let's all sing a song with our voices!👍😎✌🏼.

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