I freaking love this.  this is compositionally DEEP.  the chords, melodies, changes and how you punctuate "rain washes over mountains" musically....it is all so creative, interesting, engaging and novel.  this piece captivated me big time man.  I really like the completely original way you think.  what a cool piece of art this is.

I love the melody and everything about this song, nice work.

I like the birds in the background.  did you record this on location?

Lyrics:

Above the clouds above the sky 
Office hundred stories high 
it’s a booster seat
never helps you see

what’s the weather like outside?
what’s the date? What’s the time? 
it’s a mystery 
every day and week

Chorus

I know I let you leave
Why did I let you leave? 
You were right there in front of me
Within a whisper’s reach 

Verse 

Know/no I never did things right
Rarely even said goodnight
Laid you away
Come back someday

Now I want my life to bloom  - 
Alone here in this room
I say your name
So so in vain

Chorus

I know I let you leave
Why did I let you leave? 
You were right there in front of me
Within a whisper’s reach 

Bridge 

It’ll be better when
Is a maze that never ends 
Never ever ends
Never ever ends 

Chorus

I know I let you leave
I know I let you leave?
You were right there in front of me
Within a whisper’s/ reach 

I know I let you leave
I know I let you leave?
You were right there in front of me
Yet, I didn’t speak

What was I thinking / why? / I’m so sorry 

Writer: joel daniel
Producer: Max Hart
Players: Max Hart, Joel Daniel, Eric Gardner

Double Blind

Turn off the radio
Turn off the Spotify
Turn on the way you look at everything
That passes

Every car with its windowpanes
Pressing up against the rain
Splintering light into its halting haziness 
Constituent parts

Over and over the bridge
Upward and on to the nighttime
Going somewhere
Driver beware 
Into the right time
Is there a right time
Or is the time just right.

It’s the frame of a factory
That once was and again will be
Every mile on this long highway
Could be the same mile

Every touch of the light breaks through
Every shadow that touches you
Every car in this rolling plain
Seems to combine in rhyme

As we go
Over and over the bridge
Upward and on to the nighttime
Going somewhere
Driver beware 
Into the right time
Is there a right time
Or is the time just right.

I don’t want inertia
To be my driver
I only want to go
Where I go

I don’t want momentum
To be my driver
I only want to go
When I go

Aaron Mayer Frankel
March 2, 2025

The Right Time

Echo

The trail went 
More or less parallel 
With Green Bay Road 
From Lake Forest 
More or less 
Thirty miles  
North of downtown 
 
I used to ride 
My bicycle 
On this trail 
On Saturdays 
All the way 
To downtown 
 
How can I escape? 
We all want to escape. 
How can I breathe free? 
We all want to breathe free. 
 
Well I’m starting  
to think about 
where I want to go 
and when I get there 
if I will turn around 
I don’t know 
And if I’m sidetracked 
On the ride 
It’s not a sin 
As long as I’m 
On the way 
To downtown. 
 
I don’t want to be late. 
I know it’s going to be great. 
How can I breathe free? 
We all want to breathe free.

The Trail

And so it begins
So it begins
Rain washing over mountains
Sweeping the dead leaves away

A small little town
With bird song around
Rain washing over mountains
Sweeping the dead leaves away

First there’s an ending
That we try to get by
Like a road that’s under construction
With its great big sign

It paves over June
And leaves you in ruins
Then the only street that invites passage
Brushes the city away

To a small little town
With friends all around
Rain washing over mountains
Sweeping the dead leaves away

First there’s an ending
That we try to get by
Like a road that’s under construction
With its great big sign

And so it begins
So it begins
Rain washing over mountains
Sweeping the dead leaves away 


So It Begins

Aaron Mayer Frankel

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