كان الأمر أشبَه بِشَعرةِ رمشٍ دَخلت عَينيّ  شَخصٍ مبتورُ اليَدِين.

‏عبثًا يعتصرُ الذاكَرة، أنهُ يبحثُ عَن أيامٍ مُشمسه لا وجُود لهَا.

على ماذا أبكي  طاقتي التي أستهلكت؟ شغفي الذي غادرني؟ الطرق التي سلكتها لوحدي؟ أحلامي العالقة؟ شعوري بالغربة في كل مكان؟ شعوري الدائم بأني لست الشخص المناسب لأي شخص؟ شعوري بأني دائماً في المكان الخاطئ؟ أم على عمري الذي لا يناسب حجم الخراب في قلبي

أنا حتى صمتِ مُتعب... اه لثقل الوجود هذا ..

she's playing guitar

This piece made in response to this week's @naviar-records weekly haiku challenge was an involved process. I asked ChatGPT to use the letters of the extracted word (the "Deutzia") flower to create the note sequence for a melody. Which it did. 4 different versions of. I found these sequenes quite pleasing and found voices for them in Logic presets. From there I played each of them live in response to each other not using a time signature. However what took a great deal of time was rearranging these live parts so that it (sort of) makes sense as a musical progression. It's almost worked as an experiment, especially when I gave each voice room to breathe and have solo sections. If I was to really work on the piece seriously I'd change some notes and add more variance, but I'm pretty pleased with what's here. I've remained faithful to the notes and added some variance through transposing sections.

Here's the information about this week's challenge:

"Deutzia in full white -
deep in the night,
the Milky Way."

Ikenishi Gonsui (1650–1722) was a haiku poet from Nara who settled permanently in Kyoto in 1684. A collection of his works, entitled Ikenishi Gonsui no kenkyū, was published in 2003.

Haiku by Ikenishi Gonsui

Picture by Christina Deravedisian

Submission deadline: 3rd December 2025
To find out more and participate, visit https://www.naviarrecords.com/haiku-music-challenge/

Deutzia (naviarhaiku621)

Adam hurst - Sparrow

عزلة

Immortality (piano)

Faulkner's Sleep

المسيقى التصويرية لفلم "سعدية سابت سلطان"
"Sadya Left Sultan" OTS

الحان: محمد قربان
توزيع: عبدالعزيز جان
عازف البيس: أنس قبوري

writer: Mohammed Gurban
Composing: Aziz Jan
Bass Guitar: Anas Gubori

About to lose my mind

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