This is great! I like the message! And, this collab is the kind of song that has commercial potential. It's in your vocals and in the backing track. Wonderful! :)

I think this song is brilliant - the lyrics are so, so clever and well written. I love how you tied it all together.  The vocal effects in the verse combined with that cool bass bouncing left and right adds such nice tension.  I love how you resolve it with the chorus - it feels like the skies have opened - a wonderful contrast and transition. The bridge is such a wow - love the last 2 lines - goose bump moment - and the "do you know my name" playing on two levels - I love it! Rain is the perfect title also.  I really love this one Gina!!

holy moly what a cool production.  love the telephone effect on the vocals and the juxtaposition against the chorus vocals.  that REALLY has a strong sonic impact.  and the chorus is so catchy and engaging.  LOVE that and LOVE the bridge!  this is so innovative - such a totally captivating piece here.  hooked me in and kept me on the edge of my seat the whole time.  REALLY REALLY enjoyed this one a LOOOOTTTT.  BRAVO!  what a killer production.  need to mention some very slight Eurythmics / Lennox vibes I'm getting on this.  Stellar work.

such a cool concept! love that it's from the perspective of the rain!

Hey Gina, I really enjoyed this tune. Wonderful production ideas. I like that moving bass line under the verses and clever use of word paInting with  your descending vocals with the word "Falling". Nice job!!! Doug Sheehy

Such great production--very earcatching. Great vocal performance and excellent lyrics as well.

Rain 				by Gina Fant-Simon and Marci Geller

VERSE 1
Elsa looks outside her window and longs for me
remembering when barren fields were green
the earth outside is cracking as her faith crumbles to dust 
and she’s waiting for the day when I’ll be

CHORUS 1
falling down
falling down
everyone wants me now
everyone wants me to start falling down

VERSE 2
Noah looks outside his window and curses me
remembering when covered fields were green
the earth outside is drowning and the clouds kidnapped the sun 
and he’s praying for the day I won’t be

CHORUS 2
falling down
falling down
everyone wants me now
everyone wants me to stop falling down

BRIDGE
I’m erosion, I sculpt the valleys
I fill the aquifers below
I bid my farewell to winter 
and wash away the snow
I can be a gentle shower 
or an angry hurricane 
do you know my name

VERSE 3
people taking me for granted, dismissing me
behaving as if nothing here has changed
our foundation is cracking and everybody looks away
gotta make sure their profits don’t start

CHORUS 3
falling down
falling down
it’s an avalanche now 
everything I believed, everything I believed
everything I believed is falling down - falling down

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Rain

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