BLIGHT ON MY EYES

Composition is good, singing is a little eh, mixing is okay. Some parts of the song are strong, other parts are weak. Overall, I think it's alright.
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Verse 1:
Got a reputation and I’m bout to make it worse
Told that I loved her now I gotta make it hurt
But I don’t take no issue with it, threw it to the wind
That’s just the way the world spins

Chorus:
So now I’m heading on through
I go to seek my fortune while the day’s new
They say that they know me, I don’t know ‘em well
They say that they love me, I could never tell
Well maybe I’m a symptom of it all

Verse 2:
Got me an addiction you can see it on my face
Grinning ear to ear, my pupils got the message late
But I don’t take no issue with it, thats the way I came,
And trust that’s how I’ll leave, babe


Bridge:
I don’t recall the way back
I lost my sense of purpose in my backpack
She got me dead to rights, now
I told her that I loved her but I lied, now

Verse 3:
I read it in a book that man was born to seek his own
Dog ear on the page and left it out to let her know
See, I don’t take no issue with what simply can’t be helped
And I just can’t be helped, babe

THE ZEALOT